BML

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First thing that I wanna start off with: I was just writing the next chapter of BML and Kaito was saying something like, "...I'm gonna kick your a** into orbit!" I was distracted by my aWESOME music that I had playing and accidentally typed in 'kiss' rather than 'kick.'

-(Normally I listen to music on my laptop, and the Youtube would've been hidden, but for some reason my laptop's headphone jack isn't working and so I have to listen to music on another device. That being said, it's to the side of me as I work and type so that I can easily switch to another song if I want to, and I get distracted sometimes if the video has really good visuals...)

ANYWAY, MORE IMPORTANTLY! This next chapter has nearly 5000 words in it, and it's only the investigation chapter. I'm at a good point to just cut the chapter off, which would mean not directly showing the rest of the investigation in the Virtual World. For those of you who do read BML, what do you all think? It's easy for me to state in the next trial chapters the information that you did or didn't find while in the Virtual World, so that wouldn't really be a problem with cutting the chapter off before going into detail about the reader's investigation inside the Virtual World. I just don't want the chapter to be too long... So, please!

...give me your thoughts.

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