hi everyone!! im kinda back from the dead :)
im just letting you know, this book is going under major editing because i started this 3 years ago and it makes me want to die every time i re-read it.
there's so many plot holes like honestly, wtf happened to Elijah? and wasn't Charlotte like a daughter to Elizabeth's dad in the beginning? and why was Charlotte in Port Royal anyway? it's just a mess let's be real.
and when i say major editing, i mean starting from the beginning and starting from scratch. i know a lot of you love this book but i look at it and realize it could be so much more mature (i was 12/13 when this started i mean come on y'all) like Charlotte and Will said i love you and chapter 9 that's just illogical.
i like the way the current chapters are but even those need a little changing. let me know what you think and if you have suggestions of any kind.
also self promo, in the meantime if you wanna read a top notch book, read Sunflower Smiles because it melts my heart so much.
love,
makayla
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Damaged »•» Will Turner
Fanfiction"But let me tell you something Mr. Will Turner, damaged people are dangerous, they know how to survive." "Tell me Mr.Turner, are you damaged?" - Highest ranking: #1 in Pirates of the Caribbean UNDER MAJOR EDITING
