1: A Coma

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Tobias' POV!

The doctors kept Tris' body because there was like a 1 in a million chance that she was just in a coma and so they started doing a whole bunch of tests so they could see if she was just in a coma. It's been a month since the memory serum was out and all of the people that work here are back to normal but I don't really need to to go into detail.

(Time lapse)

They finaly called me and she was just in a coma! I run down the halls to the hospital. "Please wake up Tris, oh please wake up." I say to my Tris.

(Time lapse)

Now I have been sitting by her bed for a month crying. " Oh please please please please please please please wake up." Then I notice I'm squeezing to hard but when I start releasing her hand she squeezes back and hugs me and kisses me a kiss that I don't want to end, but the doctor came in and said for Tris to take it easy and to go home. Then she took me to sign papers so that Tris could leave, but she said "She will need some help walking."

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