The Eleventh Hour That Never Passed [ON HOLD]

Crashing

Vwoorpshh Vwvoorpshhh Vwwooooprrrrr The engines screamed! The Tardis was in flames and  appeared to be crying as she helplessly crashed down to Earth

"Aghh what're you doing buddy eh? What's wrong with you, my beautiful machine?" The Doctor asked, spinning circles around the console trying to prevent the crash. However he wasn't having any luck. Throwing switches, pushing buttons, even beating her with a hammer. Nothing was working.

PFT PFT WWVVORP WWVVORP BOOOOSHHH WWVVORP BANG
The ship shook from left to right, and the debris from the pillat began to spread through the floor. He hugged the console trying to remain upright while the ship tumbled.

VWROOP CRASH BANG pft pft!

The console sparked even more, and the monitor pinged. The Doctor pulled the scanner, Beep Ping

"Central gravity field's been deactivated, well...thisʻll be...aghhhhh!"

The Tardis began to spin out of control, and the console roomʻs central gravity deactivated it so the entire room began to rotate. He held onto the console for his life while the ship began to spin, and shake. The debris from the broken pillar scattered across the room and before he knew it the Doctor was hanging onto the console the entire ship had twisted upside down, the ceiling was beneath his feet. The sick time ship shook and throttled and the Doctor lost his grip and fell onto the ceiling landing on his feet, but then the room began to spin again, this time on it's side. He was immediately slammed into the many glass roundels on the walls shattering each one he hit, pain followed every impact.

"Ow, ow, ow, ow, Stop it, Stop It!  He complained as he was flung and bashed around the control room.

"Just need to get the Tardis stabilized, before..."

BONG BONG BONG

The cloister bell tolled,

"Yes, Yes, I know i'm in trouble, but how could it in any way possibly get worse?" The Doctor asked. The Tardis twisted and tumbled and the Doctor couldnʻt catch himself, tripping each time he stood back up.

"Aghhh Enable Voice Interface!" He screamed as he was tumbling through the Tardis

The Doctor fell towards the ground with a thud, and before the Tardis could rotate again he grabbed onto the nearby railing. The hellstruck ship began to spin once more but this time it tilted and remained on it's side, leaving the Doctor hanging above the nearest right wall opposite of the door.

Voice Interface Enabled

A hologram of the Tenth Doctor appeared

"Stabilize Tardis Central Gravity, NOW!"

Tardis central gravity broken beyond repair

"Well than fix it!!"

I am only a voice interface

"Blimey I had a metal dog more useful than you, well..., I wonder if he misses roaming these halls?"

Opening Corridor Doors

"What?! What?!! No, no, no, no, no, no! Don't don't don't!!!"

Directly underneath him part of the wall slid off and the endless coridors of the infinite ship opened up.

"Pfft Sometimes I wish this ship wasn't bigger on the...

The Tardis shook once more, the Doctor lost his grip and fell into the the Tardis.

INSIDE!!!!!"

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