-ON HIATUS- (unfortunately...)
I love to help people.
I love art and writing.
I like to critique.
Speaks for itself.
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I'm not just saying that, my good friend Wolveskttyyl has helped me with and responded to feedback on their character and the improvements are visible. May come back to this when I have time or inspiration to suggest improvements to its current state. The extra details and amendments made to her character have her make much more sense to the reader. While the design is still 'edgy' by default, the goth style makes sense for a character that has been through so much, though the cross earrings are still an anomaly (as stated before, they would damage her demon self.) The way her demonic outbursts are handled doesn't glorify her transformation or make it look all that 'cool', which I appreciate, given that it feels more like part of the character and effects her rather than being tacked on for the sake of cool demonic powers. The purple on her pre-demonic self suggests more innocence and gives more character to her than simply 'edge,' where the change in her design shows the emotional and subsequently physical changes she's undergone. Though, her character still isn't perfect. No ones character can be, truly, but there is still much to learn from here. Personally, as a small note, I just noticed her ponytail in the 'after' picture. To make her change more pertinent, cutting hair is a huge symbolic way of subtly indicating emotional growth or a change in character, so having her hair short and messy would benefit this characters overall aesthetic as well as in battle. Long hair is normally a token of innocence, so the short hair would be a good change.
If you want to ask for a character re-draw to represent your character visually instead of using an anime dress up site (be sure to credit the sites you use, kids!), let me know and I'd be happy to. I could even draft some other designs for her.
