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Title: Broken (A Fred Weasley Love Story)

Author: GinnyWeasley81

Jewellers Rating: 3.5/5

Why you should read it?

I think the story is amazing for Harry Potter fans! Sadly, I am not in the fandom and wasn't able to give such a rating that the book truly desires but I do assure you the book is amazing. I do have a couple tips though if you don't mind, GinnyWeasley81. 

1. Please have a more efficient cover because there is absolutely nothing on it besides a picture of who I presume is Lizzie Shall (a main character in the book).

2. The mix of POV's are confusing. What I mean is don't restate everything word for word like the dialogue when you are in another POV - it's redundant. Instead, continue in from the story or summarize the situation. If you need help let me know! I'll be happy too do so!

But besides that, the book is great! I have nothing against HP/J.K. Rowling books and even if I didn't personally connect with the book, the read was fairly interesting with the interaction between Lizzie and all the other characters. Can't wait until you update!