If you don't like the story, feel absolutely free to share your opinion! I have no problem with criticism. I look forward in making this into something decent, and if there is anything in it that doesn't please you, tell me what it is and tell me why! I need the criticism to make the story better. If you feel it doesn't need any edits (which is impossible), feel free to tell me as well! A few compliments wouldn't hurt :)
Thank you
- tobeornottobe1
CONTEST: Ok, so I'm giving you guys a chance to be a part of the story. Now that Savanna has the journal and got this super wise advice from Striker, she's going to write a story (no duh). So, obviously, she's going to take Striker's advice as well.
You guys get to choose the plot line of her story. It has to fit every part of Striker's advice. Just the plot line, that's all I need for it. The actual writing I will do myself. The owner of the plot line will get the next three chapters dedicated to them.
I will be judging creativity, non-cliche-ness, and fulfillment of Striker's advice. Not too complicated.
The deadline is September 1, 2014. It will be prolonged by a week if I get no submissions by the due date.
SUBMIT YOUR PLOT LINE IN THE COMMENTS! If you cannot comment for whatever reason, PM it to me and I'll post it in the comments for you! I prefer comment over PM, though, so if your comments work just fine, I ask that you comment.
This was Striker's advice, for those who need to refresh their memory:
"Let your main character go through a lot. Let them be treated like shit in the story so that the readers could sympathize with them. Let them be treated like gold so that the readers smile at their happiness. Let them go through thick and thin so that the readers could, too. Let the character fall in love so the readers could see their beautiful side. And then, when you've fallen in love with the character yourself, when the readers are attached to them, let go. Let something happen. Let them be attached to the readers only by a string. Bring your character close to death, and then, when you're just about to come to their end, save them. And you've saved the readers."
Thank you, and please submit!!!
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Broken (temporary title)
General FictionWARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS CURSE WORDS. If you aren't ok with that, I'm not forcing you to read. I just felt that the words were necessary for some characters. Also, the title is temporary. So is the cover. OK, so I wrote this story a very long...
