The Reef (under editing)

SHARKS

Nani POV:

The shark was....breathingly beautiful, aqua eyes on midnight black body, it was a large shark with the normal looking body except the fins. The fins where a little larger than rormal and at the back looked like they where almost turning into silky fabric. I reached out slowly to feel the fin and it definitely felt like silk, only half a second my fingers touched it before it swiftly turned showing me the tail. It was much like the fins only obviously bigger and the fabric look to it was more intense. It almost looked like a fighter fishes tail. It was laced with the same aqua colour in different stripes following from the top of the tail to arount half way. 'I wish I could look at this shark forever' I thought to myself 'MY CAMERA' instantly I placed my hand on my neck to feel of my camera was there where I put it before me and Akela went for round 2!

I grabbed my camera (waterproof) and put it up to my eye. Nothing? I pulled it back down to see the shark right in front of me,again placing the camera to my eye,Nothing? I took a picture any way.and another.and another 'NOTHING?!' I thought to myself 'what the he-' I was cut short when I felt a nudge I looked behind me to see noting there. I looked back to the shark in front of me I felt it again I turned around again nothing there? I slowly turned my head to see a the shark again.'what should I call you?' I thought to myself 'I've never seen anything like you in my life' 'maybe..... shimmering shark?' 'No thats stupid' 'umm light shark?' 'Nah' (gets. Used again) this time I turned my heat really fast but to no avail I turned Back around "ahhhh" I yelled hair escaping my mouth I didn't even know was in there. What I turned to see shocked me.....

Cliffhanger!

Joking I wouldn't do that

Another shark. just like he one of aqua except this one hat the red eyes and red detailing. ' how manny of you are ther?' I thought to myself staring at the beauty in front of me.

As I stared I began to become light headed not thinking by of it I continued to wonder about the sharks.

Soon I started getting dizzy, I lay down ton the floor of the cave as darkness started to consume me.

The last thing I felt before I blacked out was the familiar tug on my top.

No ones POV:
Nani woke up coughing up water And taking a deep breatht, She sat up on the surfboard Ana Taavi and Akela had lay her on and looked up at them. "aloha aku nei au akua" (thank god) said Ana with her hands in a praying position above her head. "I thought you where a goner" said Taavi as he sat down beside her. "Wow..thanks for having hope in me Taavi" Nani commented sarcastically. "What happened?" Asked Nani  breathlessly "you fell of your surfboard and somehow ended up in the reef" answered taavi.'It WAS real' Nani thought. You where laying on the seabed of the reef just stairing at the sky" said Akela seeming very confused while looking down at Nanis camera in his hands. "why do you look concerned? I'm alive aren't I "Nani said with a small laugh at the end "Yeah" Said Taavi "but that's not what we're confused about" He said as he put his hand on her knee "you had your camera still around your neck,it had several random black pictures." Said Akela 
"The time on the screen was 6:30 started Taavi "the time we where surfing when you want under the wave,was around 6:04 and it's now 7;02 you would have been unconscious for that amount of time being unable to breath" finished Akela. " but the time when the pictures were taken means you couldn't have possibly taken them"  "Anyway what IS important is that everyones okay "Said An unfamiliar voice. "Who are you I asked to a y'all guy looking around 17 "oh Nani" ana said jumping up and putting her arm around the mad with short brown hair and dark skin " this is puna." " and?" I asked still not knowing who he is "we'll.... he's mybewboyfriwndididnttellyouaboutbecauseithoightyoidgetmad" she rushed out as "oh. Cool" I said not really caring "wait your not mad?" She asked a little bit astonished " no?" I asked even though it was more of a question "REALLYYAY!" She said and squeezed the living daylight out of me "sorry" she said bulking back at so gasped for air. "Anyway" "Anyone up for a smoothie or a juice?. I mean to Dayton been quite the day" "On the house" He Said and stood up. Everyone agreed and headed towards Taavi's juice hut.

"I still don't understand" I mumbled to myself thinking oi our what happend "understand what?" Akela said putting his arm around my shoulders "oh nothing" I said he just laughed and we continued to walk.

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