Started: May 2, 2018
Ended: June 12, 2020
Status: Complete
Editing: In process
Description:
This story is based on 2 couple shivika and avneil from the TV show Ishqbaaz and Naamkaran...it also includes the couples rikara and ruvya too.....this sto...
So guys I am here with my next part.... Hope you enjoy it... Plz do vote and comment.... Here we go.... 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
Shivaay:"girls hum batana bhool Gaye ki hum kahan ja rahe hai.."
Neil:"hum....manali ja rahe....."
Avni/ani:"what....omg...manali..."
Anika:"ek min aap logo ne toh car rent ki...matlab hum log manali car se zayenge..."
Shivaay:"actually yes...woh maine doctor se baat ki thi...unho ne bola ki tumhe air travel karne ke liye 1 hafta wait karna hoga...and I know u will not be able to just sit home and do nothing....kyunki tum anika ho..."
Anika:"hay..."
Shivaay:"what it's true only...anyways....so I asked them about car travel..they said it's fine.....so hum manali car se jayenge..."
Avu:"but bhai...manali is 35hr away from Mumbai... "
Neil:"yeah...that why we will start early morning tomorrow by 5...and stay in a hotel for the night.. and do the rest of the journey next day..."
Shivaay:"by my calculations...we should reach their by 11:30 at night..."
Anika:"calculator singh oberoi"(avni giggles )
Neil:"accha aap dono packing kar lo...hum 1 hafte wahan rahenge..."
Avni:"okay..."(all were busy packing that night ....and slept all excited for the trip)
Next day 4am....
Avni...om...shiv....bhavya and gauri were up and ready....
Om:"shivaay yeh Rudy toh abhi tak so raha..."
Shivaay:"toh om tu use utha de....neil bhi so raha hai....per anika kahan hai.."
Bhavya:"di or bhai dono hi khubkaran ke bacche hai...especially di...bhai toh 8 ya 8:30 bhaje tak uth jate per di..."
Gauri:"9 bhaje ke baad..."
Om:"shivaay...avu...ek kaam karo...me gauri or bhavya rudra uthate...tum dono Neil or anika ko uthao..."(saying so he left with bhavri)
Avni:"bhai....me anika ke pass jati..."
Shivaa:"nahi....wait....muhje tere room se kuch lena hai...toh me anika ko utha donga"
Avni:(happily)"okay bhai...."(they started heading to their respective patner room...)
Shivaay:(to himself )"tuhje ho kya raha hai shivaay....why did u just said u have some work in avu room....shivaay tu pagal ho raha hai....or sab is anika ki wajah se...an chal jake utha maharani ko.. "
Avni:(to herself )"yeh muhje kya ho raha hai...jab bhai ne bola ki me Neil ko uthaon toh muhje excitement kyun hui.....us bandar se muhje itna farak kyun parta hai...nahi...avni...nahi...tuhje koyi farak nahi parta...bas....ja usse utha...or nikal wahan se..."
In shivaay room....
Neil was sleeping....avni entered.....seeing neil a smile came on her face ....she went close to him...sat down and called his name...
Avni:"Neil...neil utho..."(keeping her hand on his shoulder to shake him)"neil utho na...nei....."(before she can finish...neil pulled her hand and kept it under his face...making it a pillow fue to which avni face came very close to his....neil was still sleeping.......avni was lost in him when Neil slowly opened his eyes....as soon as he opened his eyes ....his eyes met with avni.....avni nervously looked down.....)
Avni:"ahhh woh...me...me woh...tum...so..me..."
Neil:"me woh ke aage bardo gi..."
Avni:"woh...hanth..."
Neil:"hanth...?"
Avni:"mera..."(pointing to her hand underneath his head)
Neil:"oh...(he got up and avni withdrew her hand...and they both sat on the bed ...)"tum yahan..."
Avni:"woh bhai ne muhje bola tumhe...uthane...ke liye.....is hi liye me aayi thi...maine tumhe pukara per tum nahi uthe...toh Maine...maine...tumhe hilaya per phir...phir...tumne mere hanth ko pillow samaj ke uspe so Gaye...(avni said all this in a go looking down while Neil was just lost in her innocence...he had seen the don avni...the avni with her brother but for the first time he saw the shy and innocent avni....)
While on the other hand ...
In avni room.... Anika was sleeping cuddling into the pillow... when shivaay entered....he went close to her....smiled seeing sleeping cutely....
Shivaay:"anika....anika utho..."
Anika:"sone do na..."
Shivaay:"car me so lena abhi trip pe jana hai utho na anika..."
Anika:"plz sone do na billuji.. "
Shivaay:"hey don't call me that ...(to himself )"yeh lardki kya cheeze hai...neend me bhi muhje mere naam se nahi bola skati...panika..."(shivaay sits on the bed and shakes anika a little)"dekho anika utho warna me tumpe...me tumpe pani pehekon ga...anika mere baat ma...."(his words died in his mouth as his button got stuck to anika's dress and when she turn he was pulled over her...so that anika was laying below him.....)
Anika:(opening her eyes to see shivaay so close to her)"aap yahan kya kar rahe hatiye...(shiv tried to get up but due to his button it again fell on her....this time causing their nose to touch.....they had a sweet eyelock....anika was breathing heavily...as shivaay moved...closer....their lips were centimetres apart...when the alarm rang making them come back to reality....)
Shivaay:(getting up after untangling her dress from his button )"jaldi ready hoke inche aao...humhe late ho raha..." 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
So guys hope you enjoyed it.... Plz do vote and comment.... I will update next part soon.... Next update after 60 votes.....
Precap:"manali trip on..."
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