Thanks ssmasta for the story cover. Naappreciate ko talaga! 😘 para sayo ang poem super deep na poem na to.
Sorry sa late update. Babawi ako sainyo. Heto ang isang VILLANELLE poem..
A villanelle is a nineteen-line poetic form consisting of five tercets followed by a quatrain. There are two refrains and two repeating rhymes, with the first and third line of the first tercet repeated alternately until the last stanza, which includes both repeated lines. (wikipedia)
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Where can we find such perfection?
When people lived with judgment
and held onto their own perception.
Souls of great determination
Promises were half meant
just to fufill their stupid passion
None accepted any rejection.
Aimed for such development
Loosing the right direction.
Youth seeks for correction,
love, wisdom and involvement
cause perfection is just a false assumption.
What is the sense of perfection?
When people never consider betterment
provided for the beloved nation
Why should we take an action?
The key wasn't enhancement
It was never the last option,
but our hearts' contentment.
