Chapter 2

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Shane's POV

As always I got ready for school you, know the usual outfit for the schools "bad boy" AKA me... Wich means leather jacket, black tee, ripped jeans and combat boots. I went to my bike and drove to school.
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At school.
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I was hanging out with the boys, when I first noticed the beauty rushing by... Her curly, waist length, red hair, her ocean blue eyes (almost as blue as mine) and her perfectly freckled skin... She wore a oversized black sweater, some black leggings and knee length black boots... This girl was so beautiful that I swear she will be the death of me.

"Bro, did you hear anything I just said?!" Jason asked with an amused look on his face."No but I don't care see you guys at lunch bye!" and with that I left the boys and rushed after this beautiful angel that I would just love to call mine.
I don't know how I've never noticed her before! Was I blind? Dead? Had to be, she is the definition of perfect.

She got her books from her locker, as I casually leaned against the locker next to hers, not wanting to intimidate her, but she didn't seem to notice me... Wich is impossible I am THE Shane, every girls dream, the guy every other guy wanted to be...

I cleared my throat, nothing. Like seriously? I don't know how, but this red headed beauty was making me feel... Normal? Is that what you call not having a girl falling at your feet? Was I nod good enough for this angel? I am Shane for goodness sake! Every one likes me!

A/N

Hayy babes!

What is your thoughts on this edited chapter? Better that before? I know Shane sounds cocky, but you'll learn to love him!

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