Neighbor Next Door√√

'Chapter-5'

I know the target is not fulfilled , I can't wait to write, my loyal readers wants it soonish so...here I am.

I wanna know something. I try to give best story possible and I get very good comments too,why do I lack in getting more votes.? Actually it's not a complaint. It's just my curiosity. I see other writers work they get so much appreciation in the form of votes whereas me.... well I am not sad about it but I really wanna know how I could get that response?

Whoever reading this story or this chapter please let me know the tactics to increase my votes and comments in my book. If there's a need to change my writing style or may be story process, let me know. I want my writing to reach maximum people.

I hope you can do that. ..

Thanks for bearing this long note ..

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The following day passed in silence. Om Gauri tried to patch their siblings differences, but it didn't work out. Two headstrong people plus the ego, a deadly combination. They refuse to give up, silence filled in the air.

Om and Gauri met for a coffee the following evening ,were busy discussing things. Shivaay was out of the house, for his meeting,in nearby cafe. He hates to admit but pity gaze of his employees do effect him. He hates to get the 'unwanted' attention. Wondering why, this break up phase is not leaving his concise.

He was done with the meeting.Shivaay gets a message from omkara.

"Can you just extend your meeting a little bit.?" Shivaay frowned as he already finished it, was on his way to home. Om is staying with him for couple of days.

"Why? I am already on my way." Shivaay typed, well he knew the reason. And he hates it.
He hates it when his brother gets cosy with his girlfriend in his presence. No he is not jealous or something. It's just hits his weak cord. Sometimes, he can't understand why he behaves so immaturely, when it comes to love and intimacy.

"Well you know......Gauri is disturbed so..." Om wrote hesitantly.

Shivaay gave a deep sigh, he knew it. He should have visited office instead, at least he could have spend his time well. Now, he had to wait for his brother and his girlfriend's secret romance session to get over. Why are they so impatient?

He parked his car in his parking lot. Still thinking, why he got the message so late? Now he have sit inside his car, for don't know how many hours. Why suddenly his life become like hell? He thought.

He waited, half an hour doing everything possible. Guess, new generation gadget does not provide peace like a warm home gives. It's enough!!. His brother can't hang him like that. So he took the lift and straight away went towards his flat.

Shivaay was about to knock at the door but his brotherly love stopped him. Poor Om, rarely gets any time for his lady love.! He thought and did otherwise. What can he do now? He don't have that energy to go back to his car. He roamed around the corridor for few good minutes and finally taking a deep breath he punched the doorbell.

In few minutes it held open. The look on Annika's face was more than a shock. The First thought, that came up her mind was, am I dreaming? The very annoying, the shree shree ek hazar aath kanji aakhon wala bagad billa in front of her house, looking tired and disheveled with an apologetic eyes. Wow! seems like her happy days are coming back.

She looked at him, with questioning eyes. Shivaay stood there looking all blaze. Why did he came here?

Shivaay was mouth tied, what will he say now? Annika stood there, without saying anything, for few good minutes.