redesigning old ocs

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so on a site called Quotev I had a dark book series. It was honestly pretty cringey seeing as I was 12 year old and was still in my cis straight girl phase.
I had three characters for each of the three books.
The first and cringiest book was hosted by my persona at the time, Ronnie. Here was her original design and my really shitty old art.

 Here was her original design and my really shitty old art

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I'm in so much fucking pain looking at this Then when I made the second book I was agender and bisexual so I made this new persona, Griffin

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I'm in so much fucking pain looking at this
Then when I made the second book I was agender and bisexual so I made this new persona, Griffin.

I'm in so much fucking pain looking at this Then when I made the second book I was agender and bisexual so I made this new persona, Griffin

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this was when I went through my Gorillaz art phase which was probably when my art started to have significant improvements.
Then onward to the third and final book that I never actually finished. (by that I mean I never went to the limit of chapters a book could have) My persona Alex was created, this persona actually was the reason my online friends called me Alex and I got the name I have today as a trans boi.

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this was when I full on gay trans boi (I didn't have my hair cut yet tho and oddly Alex was still a female)

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this was when I full on gay trans boi (I didn't have my hair cut yet tho and oddly Alex was still a female)

and now I present to you (drumroll please)

YEET I tried to not change much about them but make them less of mary/gary sues and git the story behind the dare book more

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YEET
I tried to not change much about them but make them less of mary/gary sues and git the story behind the dare book more.
Basically the story was, Griffin had an army of sorts when she was like 12 or some shit. Alex was 9 and was somehow smart enough to have a whole entire folder of evidence of her sister's crimes. Ronnie was stupid and had no idea anything was going on. Their dad had left them so Griffin and Ronnie's mom, Skye, and Alex's mom, Annie became a lesbian couple. Alex was held captive by her sister until she was 16 and somehow oddly had a house which Griffin took. She took back her house and war began between the two.
there is so much wrong with this story like holy shit
I'm going to revise all of this, fix the other characters in the story and maybe make a wattpad book about it 👍

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