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From the first chapter, I saw a purpose to this story as it brought me into the very quirky world of Alexis Hart. But a very important thing to note is that, when I read this story's fantastic blurb, I had an image of the story in my mind and was just very excited to read it. However, what I saw from six chapters, this is a story about a girl who lost her parents, is homeless and is trying to find a home. That doesn't sound like a cliche story, which it isn't, but some scenes and tiny things in your story were a bit non imaginative. A new point of view and concept to some of this story's plot line can go a long way. Keep up the good work!
The story was set up in a very extravagant and interesting way. I enjoyed the little myth bits and tellings and I could really see a world in those lines. Although, the chapters often had issues with filler paragraphs and scenes that I didn't even know what the purpose of them were. A popular example would all be the times you explained in excoriating detail how Chilcoat was smoking. The story moved really slow, and nothing really plot-wise took my attention. But I do see great potential in this story through some revision of the work!
I like the creativity of everything! But there's major faults in paragraphing and dialogue generally. Grammar could also have been done better. The author should focus on the plot a little more. But what makes this story stand out is the use of metaphors, emotions and empathy. Rather charming. This story is good!
The entire premise of this book? A mute girl who wants to be a singer? Very much intriguing. Great flow as well as plot. But a thing I'd like to note is that even though this book is far from the fantasy genre, it could still use a little bit of world building. I constantly found myself being confused by the peculiarity of the island. Maybe leave space in the earlier chapters to smoothen out the setting. Best of luck!
This story was perfect in its plot intricacies, special interactions between characters. Each chapter was like its own little wonderful universe with so many perspectives. The only reason why it's not a full mark, is because l felt that the flashback scenes in the story needed more storytelling and information as they are a very important plot device, so l had to cut down few marks. Other than that, an excellent work!
Well this story is basically everything. What can I say? My review just can't be me complimenting the story all day long but that's all l have to say honestly. The grammar is great and so is the title of the book. The organization and sync is also commendable. The author has a very great work in her hands. In the actual writing, the only constant issue is, the length of sentences. But in the end, the author is a master writer!
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