Breakdown 2

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So I said I'd maybe do another Breakdown some time this month, oh wait October passed...
Well anyways, how's everyone. I thought I'd post more thoughts of mine in my books and here we go.

So what can I talk about that you guys already know...

    I didn't like how long this book became but before I became an author, I liked reading long books that were at least like 25 chapters, depending on the length of the chapter. I passed 40!

    Wow, it's hard coming up with things.

    At the Halloween party, I made costumes that were fitting to that character, as I did look on the internet on which costumes they'd wear. Mikasa as a witch and Annie as a nurse and Levi as a vampire. Okay, do people still do Halloween parties now? I'm not sure.

    You know what else I'm not sure of. Dating a slut and having her break your heart and you turn just like her. I'm talking about Eren at the Halloween party still and yeah. Is that actually likely to happen? I wanted Mikasa to get pregnant before college and the end of October to August is the right timing.

    Fuck, what else did I not tell you?

    Oh yeah, when I brought the book back after the non-satisfying conclusion, I took a couple of hours thinking what would I write. I thought of a pregnancy story for Mikasa. Think about it. A beautiful, freaky, thot like Mikasa, getting pregnant. Like c'mon. I took a couple days thinking if I should put this in the book so I forced myself to write one chapter and have no choice to go with the flow.

    I just remembered I had a valentine's day chapter with Eren and Mikasa. I thought the chapter didn't matter but I thought it's be cute to make. Also I don't think it'd safe to be having any sexual activity while one's pregnant so I think I fucked up big on that.

    What still bothers me to this day is the prom. Couldn't this story be any more cliche? I don't think it's possible to wear a waist or whatever you call it on a baby. Now now I was thinking for a couple for days on how could Mikasa look stunning for a prom but not look pregnant. I was like screw it, it went with it.

    It still haunts me to this day...

And yes guys. I did have thoughts on a sequel but I-I just don't see that happening.

    *Now, I know that wasn't long but you can leave questions if you want and I always read comments. This may be last breakdown I'm writing. You know the usual and peace*

-DPPLAYER

Apr/3/19 9:53 P.M.

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