My reviews on BTS fanfics. Reccomendations and requests welcome. Mostly books I read, but you may request.
Enjoy!
Warning:
May come off as rude, but please take in mind that this is only my opinion , and I only want to provide constructive critic...
Cover: Not only for this book, but I've seen your other covers too and why're absolutely amazing! Love them ahhh. (Especially this one ;))
Title: That's actually adorable, strong power thank you.
Plot: Few things people. (Or a lot cause I really enjoyed this one.)
So the plot is actually amazing and the way you planned out the whole story is actual gold.
aLL oF tHe PloT tWiStS AND mUshY mEmbEr mOments gOt mE mESsEd uP mAn I Be soBBinG.
*clears throat*
Ahem. Anyway.
Here are my thoughts. *warning pOsSiBLe spoilers ahead because I am annoying like that ;)*
The beginning really confused me for a bit, but I feel as if it was intended and was perfect for the story. It gives users of a curiosity of what was to happen next and I swear I have so much homework to do right now but I'm here. BUT THATS OKAY ID RATHER BE HERE! :)
Next. The repetition of "I hate horror movies. Always have, always will."
Actually hit me so hard you have no idea. Repetition in stories are actually beautiful and I actually love reading it.
Writing it also gets me so excited too. :)
(Sorry I'm literally a nerd ;-;)
Anyway. I loved it as a whole, but here are some notes I had as I was reading.
The ending seemed rushed: *okay here's like the actual spoiler so like look away if you haven't read 😂*
It's just a simple opinion and the ending is not bad in any way! I really loved it. But really I just thought it seemed a bit rushed near the end. With jungkook being poisoned and then shipping him straight to Earth, along with Y/N. I don't know. I liked that part, it really kept me on the edge of my seat. And I'm not joking, I was literally on the edge of my chair.
I was also telling my sibling about it and they were like 'please stop I'm trying to do math'. bUt I AcTuALLy cOuLdnT I wAs FREAKiNG tHe fRiCk oUt. Like.. was jungkook gonna die? Was he gonna live?
WAS TAE GONNA DIE FROM THE ASPRIN?!?
It was great. It was a great time.
But we're getting off track now. Back to what I mean.
In my opinion, the chapter after when they're sitting and watching horror movies with each other and then they just go to sleep. To me it just seems like a rushed happy ending.
BUT PLEASE DONT THINK IT WAS BAD!
Again like I said, this is only my opinion and I don't mean to offend or say anything to make anyone feel bad. It's simply an opinion, and it is your story! So whatever you want to do with your stories and how ever you want to write it, I will literally love it.
The way it was written was actual gold and this is really a book I'd love to share with others.
*quickly pm's my friend this book*
ThaNk yOu fOR rEqUesTiNg OMg I LuVed iT.
Recommend?: omg why do I even have his section here anymore all your books are amazing! YES I DEFINITELY RECOMMEND. It's such a tearjerker and even has many comical moments, it's just everything packed in one!
Ending note: thank you for requesting. I am happy to have found your book and I honestly can't wait to share with my friends.
PS: *another spoiler please ignore*
I KNEW IT! I KNEW YOONGI WAS GUS I HAD A FEELING IT WAS HIM I WAS FREAKING OUT YES!
