By: luvyfics
Title: I LOVE THE NEW TITLE. Honestly I think it's really cute, and a bit lore creative than your last title. However I loved both hehe.
Cover: I loved both of your covers, but I really do think this one is beautiful UWU TEACH ME OMG CKSKX
(I'm an actual crackhead omg soRrY).
Notes:
- the storyline is really good: I personally enjoy how you're taking your time for their relationship to grow before making them become a couple. It's a beautiful way to create a story, and makes a really good plot line.
- Jungkook is such a babie but not at the same time omg-
- there were some grammatical mistakes, but overall the writing is phenomenal! You're writing is very detailed, giving us a better picture of the scene you are trying to set up for the chapter. Please know your writing is really good! :)
- the plot line of the story is very unique. I'll be honest with you, when I first read the title, I thought it was a bit cliche, but after reading the book I found out that it was a unique story, with a plot line I haven't really seen before!Recommend?: y'all better go read it right now >:[
Ending note: THANK YOU FOR REQUESTING!
KEPP UP THE GOOD WORK :)
Definitely a book that I will continue to read!- UYENNIE
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