My reviews on BTS fanfics. Reccomendations and requests welcome. Mostly books I read, but you may request.
Enjoy!
Warning:
May come off as rude, but please take in mind that this is only my opinion , and I only want to provide constructive critic...
Plot: Yes. Yes strong power thank you. IM in love with the plot and am currently waiting for an update. I like how you are able to incorporate the past and present situation well.
What I don't like: IS HOW JIMIN NEEDS TO FRICKING LEARN HOW TO TRUST THE RIGHT PEOPLE AND NOT HOES LIKE WHATEVER HER NAME IS I DONT EVEN CARE.
Anyway.
I really like the story and it is a really good read.
One of my favorite parts are the small quotes at the end of each chapter. I CRI. I relate to them so much, and they are written SO WELL.
Some notes however: There is a lot of repetition of "I's" Like I woke up, I liked that I danced I slapped jimin in the face for being a naive little brat
Capitals are also needed please.
But those are just gramatical errors.
And I always screw those up sooo....
The way the story is written is very good. :)
I can't wait to read more!!!
Recommend?????: YES PLEASE
IF YALL READING THIS..... STOP AND GO READ THAT BOOK BECAUSE YALL WILL LOVE IT.
