Grammar Nazis, and other people meticulous about things like homophones, spelling, et cetera, unleash your skills on this book. I wrote it long ago and it could use some work.
Readers of Concrete, this story is on the same timeline. Before or after, nobody knows. I need to finish Concrete and rewrite this one before I decide.
Any viewers, if you are reading this and a good name for the story jumps into your head, let me know! I'd love to know. I might even use your story name.
The beginning of the story fails in areas. Continuity isn't strong with this one. There are confusing parts. Those will all be fixed in the rewrite, but if that's your pet peeve, either say how I could make a certain part better, or feel free to not read it. Just don't get up in arms over it, I am aware of bad parts.
All formalities aside, I hope you enjoy the story, so go ahead and dive in!
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Fiksi IlmiahThis story is meant to be on the same timeline as my current story, Concrete. It's my first one, and I wrote it years ago, so it isn't as good as Concrete. I'm posting it because I haven't had time to work on Concrete, but this one has more that's d...
