Pride (poem)

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I looked at her

really looked at her

face, pale

fingers, numb

eyes, unopened

she looked exhausted

frail

weak

the strong-willed

woman I used to know

gone

I held onto her hand

her breathing slowed

she opened her eyes

for the last time

and in those eyes

I saw

pride

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It's kinda sucky....I couldn't really think of anything else so cut me some slack...... :) pwease?

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⏰ Last updated: Dec 22, 2016 ⏰

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