I looked at her
really looked at her
face, pale
fingers, numb
eyes, unopened
she looked exhausted
frail
weak
the strong-willed
woman I used to know
gone
I held onto her hand
her breathing slowed
she opened her eyes
for the last time
and in those eyes
I saw
pride
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It's kinda sucky....I couldn't really think of anything else so cut me some slack...... :) pwease?