Sleeping in coma

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Everyone wakes up, she keep sleeping. The time gets 4pm they needed to leave for the city, which is 4 hours car drive. Her dad packs everything. They put her to lay on the front seat. Her eyes are still closed eyes. They got to the city. She is put in bed. The next day she has school. The alarm rang... she didnt wake up. Her sister wokes up and comes to wake her up for school, but she can't and eventually she leaves for school and she continues sleeping. After she sleeps for 4 days her mom desides they take her to the hospital.
She has done something so badly with her brain that has caused her falling into coma.
She stayed in the hospital for the next few weeks. Her internet family texts her and wonders where she went. Her sister starts thinking "I know she loves those internet people, maybe it's not a bad idea to try and tell them" she types in "Hello people. I am not your friend. I am her little sister. 3 weeks ago we came back from the sea, she fell a sleep the day before we left and still hasnt woken up. So she wont be able to talk to you for a while'
They started replaying to that story and messegeing her even more. The little sister turns off her phone tho and they don't hear from her for the next 2 weeks. She am still a sleep in the hospital.

"Is she going to wake up doctor?" her mom asks worried.

"She will. Can you tell me what has been happening in her surroundings? We need to find what coused it"

"I went out with a friend when i came back she was already sleeping, i dont know what the time was, maybe like 2am" her sister says to the doctor

"I fell a sleep before she even came home" her dad says. He blames himself for that.

"With your permission we must study her brain" the doctors say.

"She talks in her sleep, will that help?" her sister asks.

"Actually, it might help a bit sweetie" the child smiles.

"Okay do whatever just wake her up" her parents agreed to the doctor's idea.

Her room starts being recording at nights. They put a special macine over her head so that they figure out what's wrong. They find this small black thing. No one knows what it is. Its something... its pain. The girl in coma can hear them talking and she cries. She trys to talk to them from her dreams and tell them what wrong and that she is okay.
Five months pass, school starts again... she never appieared. Her class starts worrying and wondering....
She is stuck in nowhere writing to herself and to her mind...

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