Waiting

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It's been 3 hours. 3 hours of crying yet nothing. No signals that he might survive. No signs. NOTHING! I wiped my Cheeks with my sleeve and went to grab and coffee and ring Alfie's parents. I mean there probably gonna want to find out that there son is in a coma and probably will die because of me. Oh for gods sake more tears came steaming down my achey face. I grabbed my phone from my pocket as I sat the coffee that was burning my hands on the counter beside me as I lifted the phone to my ear.

Zoe: hello? I sniffled.

Alfie's mum: oh hello darling is everything okay?

Zoe: no everything's flipping awful. I squeaked as I fighted the tears that were trying to be set free.

Alfie's mum: what? What's happened? She asked worriedly.

Zoe: it's alfie me and him had a fight he left and got in a car crash he's in, he's in a.. A.... Coma. I burst tears streaming.

Alfie's mum: oh my god. Honey stay there I will be there as soon as.

With that she ended the phone call as I fell to my knees. Who knew one small girl could cry so much?

1 hour later Alfie's mum and dad came down the dark, dull corridor I stood up and opened my arms and gave a hug to his mum then dad then we all went in. Alfie's mum started crying when she saw the state of him. I really do love his parents. Most people's parents would normally hate me if I had done it to there son but no his parents still love me so actually I'm so relieved anyway alfie moved his index finger but the doctors say it's not really good evidence that he's gonna survive. I gave my flatt keys to Alfie's parents. There gonna stay there tonight so they can come back tomorrow. I'm gonna sleep, well I'm most likely not gonna sleep so sit here and just watch out and see if alfie actually moves or anything. Please say he does.

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