Percy POV
If you want to know where exactly things went wrong then percy could start anywhere in this day but the major clue was the dozen or so golden weapons pointed at him. Now percy didn't have much memory, well actually he didn't have any but he knew this was a bad sign.
Suddenly one of the swords came down it was coming slowly like it was just going to prod him but his instincts took over and he grabbed the kids wrist pulled him down and himself up percy struck him in the throat and he went down. About 20 people stood back in shock.
'Stand down, we won't hurt you,' a guy well built with a plumed helmit he was about percy's age but then again he didn't even know that.
Percy stood ready to fight, he wasn't about to take that out on faith. 'How do I know you won't just stab me,'
'We outnumber you 20 to 1 if we wanted to kill we would of done it already.' Plumed helmit replied.
Percy still didn't trust him he made contact with plumed helmets eye's. He let his instincts take over he puched on of the gold armoured people in the face and he went down. Another guy stabed at him but percy grabbed his wrist and put the person in an arm lock he pushed him into the crowed and ran for it threw the gap he heard them yelling for reinforcements, percy looked back and saw that 5 of them were tring to give chase but would never be able to keep up at there rate.
Percy ran for about 20 minutes he could still here them yelling at each other but they seemed far enough away for him to take a rest. He leaned against a tree and checked what he had on him, in his pockets he had a ball point pen probably cost 20 cents but he decided to uncap it and in less than a second he was holding a shimmering bronze xiphos. A sword 3ft long and perfectly balanced in his hand it had writing on its hilt Anaklusmos, Riptide. It was written in aceint greek he knew that at least.
'Hello child,'
Percy jumped, but what he saw wasn't an armoured soldier it was an old women. Percy had his sword pointed it at her, he had a bad feeling. 'Who are you?' He demanded.
'Juno child,' she said like it was somthing to be proud of, ' and if you want to survive you shall carry me accross that river and then i will give your life back.'
'You have my memory?' That sounded ridiculouse she couldn't of stolen his memory? Could she?
'I will not not give it to you straight away,' She said ignoring his question. 'Just what you want the most.'
Hmm what did he want the most? Blonde hair and grey eyes flashed threw his mind. A girl, he wanted her name.
'Fine' he felt like he was going to regret this., he carried her but she felt like half a dozen sandbags.
'Their!' Your kidding me, they'ed alreay caught up with him? He was dead.
He ran to the river and wadded in, it was waist deep, he kept wading.
A harpoon like javelin flew just passed his face, but the water gave him strength but it seemed to be sapping somthing from the the small of his. Percy couldn't worry about that now. Juno cackeled and he looked at her like she was crazy, which she probaly was. Over the river he saw a fort. Damn they better be freindly. Suddenly he relised he'd left his sword over at the other bank.
'Damn it' He yelled and started cursing.
'Clean your mouth boy,'juno said sternly, he glared at the old women if it wasn't for her he'd still have a weapon and chance. 'your sword will return to you don't worry.'
She better be right. He crossed the looking back he saw there were nearly forty golden warriors just over the back of the river, they got those reinforcements then percy thought, more came from the fort. Perfect.
His sword was still over the other side of the river he wasn't crossing it again. There was only one thing for it, he put the old lady down and he focused on the river he throust his arms out and a watery wall came out he thrust it at the golden warriors and they fled or were hit by a giant wave and force back. He turned his attention on the other hudred warriors coming straight for him. But of course his amazing new discovered power was destroyed just as he was hit by a name. Annabeth, the blonde girl. He fell on his kneas and suddenly just cause she hadn't messed with him enough already juno began to glow.
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