The text below is the thoughts of mine after (or in the case of the third PS, during) I finished the story. So, eh... Thank you for reading! One more thing, my recent comments are written between <> signs.
Post Scriptum no.1 <written after chapters one and two>
Hello again! This time... I don't really have many things to say. I mean this is a story clearly based on Corpse Party, and... well that's really it! Blackened Wounds <Yes, that was the original story title> also re-uses a few characters from my previous shorts, such as basically the main character from a different story, where he's successful in summoning the elder god, and he embarks on a time travel quest to destroy the American rebels right before the Boston Tea Party. Also, Mary and her friends (more about them will be later, I promise!) are also re-used from a scrapped sci-fi story of mine, where she used to serve an"encyclopedia" cliche of a character. As you see, it never got anywhere.
Ah yes, about the location itself, I got this idea mainly from two sources: Silent Hill 3 and Corpse Party. I decided to do my own spin on CP's formula and decided on an abounded mall originally somewhere in western Ukraine or something. And yes, I will add new characters, whose purpose is to explain the basic backstory of this place, don't worry, because my idea about it is pretty good in my opinion.
Oh, and also, for the time being, the title is unrelated to the topic of the story. As usual.
So, that's all for today,
Nara.
03.04.2018.
Post Scriptum No.2 <written after chapters three, four and five>
Aaah! Here I am again, month again. This time I think I have outdone myself because the story in the chapters 4-6 is (at least in my opinion) one of the better I wrote.
How it will the text be working now, you know without the main protagonist? The answer is quite simple: I will change perspectives, based on the chapters, so for example in chapter X, the character A will narrate events with its own style, but on the next chapter, the character B might narrate the events of that chapter. In the next chapters, the three protagonists are going to be (I don't really think that's a spoiler) Sima, Amy, and Mary, each focusing on something different. For example, Amy's chapters are going to be themost dialogue heavy. <until I decided that the last two chapters are going to be narrated by Mary for some reason!>
What was cut during the writing?
Let's think about it. In general, chapter 5 <chapter four, Happiest Day> was supposed to be an extra chapter, located after Post Scriptum as a way of telling how Mary got to the supermarket in the first place, but I decided to include it in the original story, introducing her group of friends at the same time. Ah, yes more about them will be in the next chapters, by the way.
That Aussie soldier is the same guy who wanted to eat his friend in the third chapter, and his place was supposed to be much later in the story, but I decided against it, and I will replace him with something else I guess. <More about it in third PS!>
Mike's death was different, and Sima was supposed to say the story's title, <remember that the original title was going to be Blackened Wounds!> but well, it didn't work in here, so I replaced that with the"Bleaker" part. Why the guy's called Bleaker? No idea, butmaybe it has something to do with listening to Opeth's Bleak. Maybe.
That was all for today,
Nara 18.05.19
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Crimson Wounds
Gizem / GerilimA British nationalist named Mike tries to fulfill his dreams of restoring the Empire, by an ancient ritual, but something goes wrong and he lands in an abanded... supermarket, somewhere in south-eastern Ukraine. Now, his duty to escape this place an...
