This is a great story about a great idea. The use of descriptive words makes it feel like you're there with him, in the middle of a post apocalyptic wasteland. They could improve by shortening some of the paragraphs, but everything else deserves nothing but positive feedback. This is the kind of book you read again and again, and buy every sequel. It's a great book, in short.
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RandomI'm judging your writing based on Grammar, Storyline, Characters, etc. I may hurt you, so don't report me to the police or throw a fit. Once I get a little bit of foot traffic, I'll update faster. *Judgmental sip of tea* On the lighter side, we have...
