My Short Stories

The Hunted House

The song on the side is Kidnape the Santy Claws from Nightmare Before Christmas. This story is in the readers point of view. Please enjoy.

"Why hello visitor." A man says with a very creepy smile as you walk into the hunted house. The man had unruly black hair and red eyes that you were pretty sure were just contacts. "You will stay here until you die." The man said, his smile getting bigger. You just rolled your eyes at him. But the friends that you came with just scream. You didn't believe in stuff like this but your friends forced you in here.

"This is so boring." You say turning to your best friend, Danny. You guys had gone a little further in and you were bored out of your mind. But Danny on the other hand was scared out of his mind. You wouldn't be surprised if he peed his pants soon.

"How could you find this boring?" He asked you with surprise in his voice. Danny was very easy to frighten. But here they only did jump scares and jump scares don't scare you.

"Jump scares just aren't scary." You say with a bored tone in your voice. Just then a vampire jumped out of no where and made the courd scream. All but you of course. Then after about a hour you came to a man with black unruly hair.

"Why hello visitors." The man says with a very creepy smile. You start to think about how this man looks like the same man who was at the front of the hunted house.

"Hey isn't this the same man who was at the front?" You lean over and wisper in Dannys ear. But he doesn't seem to notice this.

"What do you mean? This is the front. We just started." Danny says looking over at you curiously.

'What does he mean? We started about a hour ago." You think to yourself. Then you relise what else the man said when you came in.

"You will stay here until you die." He says with the same creepy smile. Then you relise what is happening. He was right. You will stay here until you dies. But you don't want to stay here till you die. You have things you still want to do. You want to marry someone nice. Have 3 kids. But you won't be able to all of this if your here till you die.

"I've got to get out of here." You wisper to yourself. But Danny can here you and he looks over at you with a werid look.

"Are you ok?" He asks you. You just look at him with a blank look. Then you run towards one of the walls and you jump throw it. Everyone just looks at you weirdly. But you can't stay there any longer. You look behind you and you see a the black haired man chasing you. He was holding a bloody knife.

"You can't run away. We can't let you get away and tell everyone about our secret." The man said. Then you trip on a branch. He catches up with you. He grabes you by the neck. You stuggle in fear of what will happen to you if you don't get away. But in the end you can't get away. He stabbes you hard near your heart. You scream out in pain but don't die yet. Then he stabbes you over and over. Until you can swear you see the light.

You know that you shouldn't but you start walking towards the light. But something pulls you back and you see the man again.

"You can't leave yet. You will pay for what you know. You will work forever at the hunted house." He says and then you black out.

Thank you for reading. This is because of Halloween coming up soon. So happy early Hallows Eve. But I will have a better one for Halloween. So please wait. Good bye.