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WELCOME TO THE FIRST YEAR OF NOVEL CONTEST 2019!
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Merit is a young orphan living in the streets of Ilusia, the greatest industrial city known in the world, as she walks through the dreary city aimlessly carrying unfulfilled dreams and empty hopes on her shoulders, she encounters a mystery that changed her entire world, will the young stray be able to somehow change the world's dismay?
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Concept - Creativity, Ideas, Style: 5/4
Plot: 5/5
Tone - Characters, Language, Point Of Views: 5/4
Voice: 5/4
Spelling and Grammar - Punctuation, Editing: 10/9
Style: 10/9
Organization - Research: 5/5
Development - Plot, Tone, Characters: 5/4
Total: 50/44
Review/Comments by Judge: Your writing style is very good and expressive, which leaves the reader anticipating for more. However, you need to improve in the dialogues department and on keeping the story going smoothly during the POV changes.
