Now, because PR is two stories being told into one, I had to cut out a lot of the Quartet's storyline in order to make room for the main storyline.
As a result - I am EXTREMELY dissatisfied with the result.
And because of the fact that JMAOC has no magic, no gods, and all the characters are adults - There's almost no way I can implement any of my previous ideas into JMAOC. It's supposed to be dark as well.
For example -
Superpowers (other than dashing) for the quartet, each different
Interactivity between Lycanthropy and the other bosses, Barracuda and Fresh
Hostile rivalry between Quin and Pi
Tetra getting kidnapped?
More in-depth details about Neptune and Skye
Annihilate Fresh's true brutality
A different (and lowkey more hilarious/epic) version of TIO
Different Character designs
And yeah
so, do you think I should do this? Create a separate book for this storyline? PR being completely unrelated to it?
Tell me what you think in the comments
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||FINISHED|| Pink Roses (JSAB Fresh x Reader)
Romance'Alright Butterfly, here's the thing about you humans, you'll believe anything you're told as long as it's coming from a trusted authority figure.' CURRENTLY FINISHED Fresh, as he calls himself, was the equivalent of the Demon King in this universe...
