Suicidal Reflection (August 15 Special Remake)

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My life is like a flower, delicate , fragile

But being trampled on by so many people
I was there left broken,shattered, ripped to pieces
Not being cared by her own surroundings

As I walk to the edge about to jump, shoes removed
Oh wait, a girl with a red tie is there before me
Despite myself and my pain,I go screamed
She then heard what I just said "Hey, don't do it please"

Then I heard all her problems, I convinced her
That she can find someone, the end is not near
"I'm feeling better, thanks for listening" she smiled
The girl that came to the roof first, then disappeared

And like that, there's just at least one everyday
I listened to their tales, I made them turn away
But yet, there was no one who could this for me
No one has the guts to, everything's all too late

When I came, I saw someone, suffering like me
Our problems like me, but no solution
I then started thinking "When will all of us learn?"
I then told ber to not have the same fate as me

Finally, no one is here, oh this is great,yey
All I want is everyone to be just, happy
It is getting late now is the time
The end of today, the end of a life


August 15-the date when I wrote my first poem

Well I decided that I will remake this since I was still an amateur in making poems at that time but now, it's getting better and better from time to time right now

Hope you enjoy!

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