Secrets: a Golden Age story

Chapter 4

Hey guys, so in this fan fic of a fan fic, Rain is our main character, so just as Jenny from The One Love is the main character. While in Fight for Dorl the main characters were Denis and Corl, but there were a lot of chapters in other characters POV in both stories.  I love the way Darkhood2004 writes, and how Sroeland000 wrote their stories. Their main characters take up more of the story, which they should. However, I do feel that a some of the characters didn't have that much representation like Karla (The One Love), Lacey, and Lacey's girlfriend that I can't remember the name of so I'm going to call her Megan (Fight for Dorl) and some others. Angel, who was heavily referrenced but was only given a few POV parts. Of course this could have been intended to keep her more mysterious, but in The One Love  I found out her name and more about her personality and stuff and I'm just like: damn I wish I had more. This is not hate by the way, it's a set up to a point. So in my story I will try to give scenes to fan favorites (Aras, Jenny, Elijah) But most scenes to characters like Rain, Felix, and Beth; to make it more my own because those are my characters. I will also try to give more character representation to Karla, why? Because she mentioned but not heard and that bugs me, #JusticeForKarla (Darkhood2004 pls don't kill me this is just a joke... but Karla representation would not be bad, but it's your story so do what you want, even if you just wrote hot pockets 10,000 times, I'd still like comment and subscribe with notifications) that's it for now guys, see you at the bottom of the page. OH I ALMOST FORGOT! COMMENT BABY NAMES PLEASE, I WILL PICK ONE BECAUSE I DON'T HAVE THE BRAIN CAPACITY TO THINK OF ONE AND COMMENT FAN FAVORITE CHARACTERS FROM 1ST TO LAST SO I KNOW WHICH ONES YOU LIKE MORE AND SHOULD GET MORE SCENES. SORRY THIS WAS SO LONG I SHOULD STOP YELLING lol

Rain POV 

     It's been a nine days since I was assigned the mission, Aras is pregnant, Ben and I are going on a date tonight, and now I'm choosing a weapon from the armory. I figured a simple pistol berreta mod would be fine. I didn't intend on killing anyone, just taking them into custody. I walked out of the armory and locked it. Then I walked across skywalk 6 to the parking garage where I took the elevator down to floor D. 

     Shragon was supposed to meet me in the parking garage section 14, spot 76; by our black unmarked transit, but he's five minutes late. The least he could do is show up. I debated checking my phone, not wanting to seem unprofessional in case he walked in, I decided to not scroll through my phone.  I rocked on my heels waiting for him to show up, did something happen to him? Or is he flat out stupid?

     "Agent Rain?" I hear. I see a boy running over to me.

     "Agent Shragon I assume."

     "Yes Agent Rain, I'm sorry I was late, I went to section 76, spot 14 instead of section, 14 spot 76," he explains. The kid looked about ten, where he is at, that's a modest position. He's probably a legacy like me. I pick up my phone and look through his file, yup he's ten and a legacy.

     "What weapon have you chosen?" I ask.

     "Automatic glock 18 caliber," he says.

     "Nice, I see your already dressed, do you have a black cap or something? Blonde hair will stick out."  The boy blushes, "I assume that's a no." I'd have to mark that down as well as his tardy, of course, I was also being evaluated, so I couldn't give Shragon anything but moderate professionalism.

     "I'm sorry," he apologizes.

    "It's fine, I have an extra in the van, we should get going." Me and him get in the van. He smiles nervously at me from the passengers side.  Tossing him a cap I smile back. There is no need to be hard, I am not trying to scare him, only to make sure he is doing his best. I backout of the parking space and drive up to the ground level to exit the garage. I do my retina scan to open the gates. Heading along the winding road to the next  gateway which was a finger scan I tried to stay focused on my thoughts. It took another two minutes to reach the main road. "So you're a legacy like me," I make conversation.