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Hope you enjoy reading 😉Cabir- Manik!!! Summer Vacations are coming in a week...... what's the plan, where are we going Mann......
Mukti- yeah bhai, I want to go Goa this year now I am grown up please Bhai.....
Convince mom for this please please please pretty please Bhai.........Dhruv- yes buddy we should definitely go this year... Next year we'll be in college... it's the last school year .....
Aliya- I second their decision... We should definitely go....
Manik- anyone else left to request me.....
Nandini- hey guys what are you discussing??? By the way meet my friends Abhimanyu and Navya, they are in the other section....
Aliya and Dhruv - yeah we know them we sit behind them...
They are awesome people...Mukti and Cabir - hii guys....
Manik- hey man, how r u?? Long time no see...
Abhi- hii bro!! Nothing was just busy in the boring school life with this bookster of mine....
He said taking Nandini in a side hug...
And boom our Manik was jealous...he observed Nandini's face closely and their was no sign of any discomfort...Moreover Abhi said Mine word for Nandini.....
He clenched his fist but controlled himself in front of his friends...Mukti- How do you guys know each other?
Abhi- Manik plays football with me and now we got another reason to know each other, right K Bear....
Cabir- who's K Bear ?
Nandini- Abhi calls me K Bear....
Don't mind him guys he's irritating majority of times but a real sweetheart...Abhi kissed her forehead and said
Abhi- Yeah I love to irritate but only to u... No one else... She's my koala bear that's k bear....look she's fat like Bear and even has these chubby cheeks....
Before he could speak more, Nandini realised what he was saying and started hitting him on his chest and forearms......
Nandini- u r very bad, I hate u abhi go away I won't talk to you....
Abhi- Sorry k bear, please forgive me u know na that I love you.... Please....
Nandini stomped her foot and left from their.....
Manik was fuming in anger and was stuck on the part 'I love you'
Everyone started laughing seeing them fight cutely but their was one more soul who didn't liked it, it was our second Malhotra i.e Mukti....she was glaring abhi....
Abhi saw her glaring and made a puppy face....
But he didn't know that both these Malhotras are planning to kill him for this....
Mukti- you made her angry now go behind her....
Abhi- ahh.. don't worry she must have left for the library to study... She always does that...
Aliya- aww u both know each other too well so sweet...
Cabir- guys we are planning to go for a trip to Goa, what say would you guys like to join us??
Aliya-yeah guys why don't you join us it will be fun
Navya- Goa what are you saying my father will kill me I won't get permission.....
Abhi- ya guys moreover we are going Mangalore this year like every year....to our granny's house....
We won't get permission....Dhruv- Mangalore is an awesome place with beaches and peace. It is a refreshing area guys ...u all are lucky to go there every year.....
Manik excused himself and went away....
Here in an empty corridor Nandini was walking towards the library and talking to her aiyappa
Nandini- Aiyappa! Why this idiot had to open his mouth can't he stay quiet I don't like it when he calls me fat Infront of my friends ....now I won't talk to him, I hate him.....
No Aiyappa I don't hate him, I love him but what to do he annoys me I'll complain to his mom, yes she'll scold him ...yayyy.....aaaahhhhhShe was talking when a fuming Manik dragged her to an empty room....he heard her talking...
Manik- what did you say Murthy you love him but that day u were saying u r not interested in anyone....
Ohhh now I get it u were trying to grab attention by acting innocent....nice Huh very nice....well played Murthy I m impressed....
Well what were your plans Huh to play two at a time hmmm nice.....
I was falling for your this innocent looking face but I suppose you're black from inside .....Manik was holding her very close, grabbing her both hands in his tight hold....his eyes were blood shot red...... raging breathes.....and Nandini was unable to speak anything she felt shattered listening to such blames.... Tears were flowing from her eyes continuously as if her soul was hurted....
Manik- what! Why are you crying now, ohhh your plans failed right... Now what to do ??? Yesss idea I won't tell abhi and u can be my girlfriend ....or shall say half girlfriend, half of you are of Abhi's right....
So yes it's decided Infront of everyone we are nothing but other than that you are my half girlfriend.....
Come on now kiss me nandu baby.... Kiss your boyfriend....Nandini tried to escape him....
Nandini- Manik leave me... It's hurting , let me go please....
Manik forcefully kisses her on her lips as if punishing her for being someone else's love
Nandini was shocked in the beginning but then she started hitting him and pushing him but all in vain....
Finally he left her..... She pushed him and ran away crying....
Manik kept his hands on his head and cursed realising what he did in anger...
Thanks to everyone who are supporting me to write further.... thanks a lot....❤️❤️❤️
Hope u like it if not give your true opinion I will try to improve.
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Will update soon
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