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Hope you enjoy reading 😉Nandini ran away from there to the washroom and locked herself.....
She washed her face as if removing dirt from her face and forearms with her trembling hands. She broke down and started to cry cursing herself for trusting and for being friends with a person, sorry scratch that a monster like Manik......
She was hating every moment of their time spent together.
She dried herself and went for her class ....
Mukti saw her and noticed that Nandini was not okay, so she asked about it but our Nandini can't share her pain with anyone, she can't see Mukti being hurt....
So she declined saying she's fine....and begin her studies....___________________________________________
Manik after being frustrated and angry with himself went to music room and started playing his guitar....
He remembered how Abhi and Nandini were close and what he said to Nandini and his physical and emotional assault on her.
Her teary eyes came in front of his vision he started singing and there was one person observing every action of Manik but didn't interrupted him ....
(Imagine Manik's performance on this song and focus on lyrics)Manik's hand was hurt, it was bleeding
Cabir noticed it and went to stop him but manik was not listening , being stubborn as always.....
Cabir had witnessed Manik and Nandini's moments except where Manik misbehaves, so he had an idea that it was because of Nandini and Abhi being close and Manik getting jealous...
He went out to get the first aid when he found Abhi....
Abhi- hey Cabir! Did you went to class, I wanted to know about Nandini, Is she okay.....
Cabir- no man I didn't attend the class, I'll see you later...
Here Nandini was passing by from there when she saw Cabir with first aid kit....
The poor, concerned soul went behind to see whether Cabir is fine or not or who is hurt....They both entered the music room one after the other... Cabir was insisting Manik for the first aid but he was being adamant on not agreeing with Cabir.....
Stubborn Malhotra
Nandini saw his bleeding hand and went towards him running...
She grabbed his hands to examine and was baffled seeing the blood dripping off continuously....She took hold of his hand to cure his pain...but Manik jerked her away... She again held his hand and he shouted that he didn't want any first aid...
This time Nandini looked directly into his eyes .... Taers were brimming in her eyes...they were red and puffy... Manik felt guilty....
This time he let her do what she was doingShe cleaned it and tied it with cotton and band to prevent the further bleeding.....
All this while Manik was just staring at her, feeling guilty seeing her concern
He called her
Manik- Nandini, I'm sorry. I shouldn't have done that I'm really sorry.......
She ignored him and asked Cabir to take care of him and left....
Cabir- dude are you ok?? I mean Manik Malhotra is apologizing ....woowww ...... wait...
What did you do with her ??Manik- I hurt her badly....
I should have not interfered in her and Abhimanyu's matter.I need to understand that she loves him, they are in relationship.....
Godd what did I do......
Cabir- just a second, what did u said....
She's in relationship with abhi, they love each other .......
Have you gone mad??Yess they love each other but like a brother and sister not that of a girlfriend and boyfriend....For god's sake Manik they both are cousin brother sister......
What the fuck did you do????Now Manik was drowning in guilt.
Reality came crashing down on him....
He was regretting more now.....
He cursed himself and his anger.
And then narrated everything to Cabir feeling ashamed..Cabir- u did what???
Manik had u gone mad u....u not only physically hurted her but even broke her emotionally.....
She's such a pure and innocent soul ...
I need to go and check on her....But to his dismay Nandini had already left for home.....
She went home and locked herself and cried herself to oblivion ......
She came for dinner and had it quietly.... her brothers' felt her behaviour strange but chucked it thinking it to be assignment or any study related pressure.......
Here Manik went home and Fab 5 also accompanied him, they decided to party....
Manik asked Cabir about nandini' s condition....
Cabir gave an negative reply....that he didn't met her.... Mukti told everyone about nandini being upset regarding something.....but couldn't guess the reason.
However Mukti thought it to be because of Abhi....
She called him and scolded him telling about nandini's behaviour.....
He felt guilty and was about to cut the call when Mukti said
Mukti- listen you moron if she won't be smiling by tomorrow then I won't talk to you for a week and no touching even....
Listening to her Abhi's face paled
Abhi- sorry baby I'll talk to K Bear and even apologize for it but please no punishments....
Yes our this Malhotra and Murthy were already dating and really loved each other for more than a year now.....
That is the reason why Mukti easily caught up with Nandini and became Friends.....
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