* Hey there everyone... I wanted a little help... Could you please point out my mistakes.. it helps in editing...
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Hope you enjoy reading 😉The boy entered in the principal's cabin only to witness a complaining Mrs. Rai.
He was continuously glaring her as she stuttered and continued speakingRai- Sir th this.. this is that boy.. he misbehaved in the class and shouted on me in front of everyone.
Sir- What did you do Mrs. Rai?
He gave her a questioning look after looking at the boy's direction.Rai- I was just teaching and he entered the class without asking so I scolded him..
Sir- are you sure Mrs Rai that was it..
Rai- ye yes.. yes sir
Boy- She talked ill about Mukti and questioned her values and teachings...
I see she was new here..... U know what to do sir.. n yeah it should not reach to momHe had a demanding look... Mrs Rai was confused with their talk...
Sir- Mrs Rai u are fired.
Rai- what!!! How can you do that it's not fair. Who is this hell of a boy that you r not even questioning him...
Boy- u asked me that do I own this school ...
Then answer to your question is Yes I own this school... Manik Manik Malhotra and no one messes with me or my loved ones specially my family....
You got that...Yes the boy was none other than Manik Malhotra. He was the all rounder of the school. Girls used to die for his one glance but he never cared about anyone.
He had only 3 ladies in his life, his mom sister and alya his best friend.He was Mukti's twin brother, elder by 5 minutes but protected and cared for her as his little baby. In fact she was his baby doll and he was Jaan, Bhai Jaan for his baby sister.
He went out to find fab 5 present over there.
Dhruv- Hi buddy! What's up... Heard your anger few minutes before. By the way thanks for it our teacher too ran away...
He chuckled.
Manik- hey Dhruv hi Aliya. And ur welcome, after all what are friends for..
And they all had a hearty laugh.
Nandini was standing at a distance and watching them. She always admired there bond.
The bell went off and with that even Dhruv and Aliya left...
They all get settled as the teacher entered in the class and even Nandini having no other option left to settle down beside Mukti, she was still afraid by Manik's anger...
Mukti- Nandini where were you? And meet him he's my brother Manik and he's sorry for shouting at you previously... Right Manik..
She elbowed Manik to speak.
Manik- ouch mukti.. it hurts and I m not sorry for anything I didn't do anything wrong....
Nandini- it's ok u don't need to Mukti I was just here only in the class.
Their classes continued till the break...
During that Nandini went to meet Abhimanyu and navya... In their classes and here fab 5 gathered
Further after break the whole day went away with manik and Nandini studying and Cabir and Mukti bickering over every possible thing....
Fab 5 had practice after school so they went to their music room.
Here Nandini went to her house.
After reaching home she found her mother in the kitchen and younger brother Akshay watching TV. And her elder brother Rishabh and her papa were no where in sight... She assumed them to be out for some work .She had a joint family back in there village but here in city she just had her parents and her 2 brothers.
She loved them all but sometimes the useless siblings fight would make her feel low about herself... Sometimes in anger her elder brother used to say that she was nothing but just a fool, a big zero a failure.... Which she took on heart cause she was close to her elder brother so his words affected her thoughts....
She thought about school and felt that this year something was different, it was her last year of school life she wanted to enjoy it... Like fab5 did....
Thank you everyone for reading my story.☺️
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