Kung new writer ka at gusto mong mabasa ang posibleng maging opinyon ng magbabasa ng nobela o mailing kuwento na sinulat mo, baka nasa tamang lugar ka!I'll give insights to your story as a reader, not a critical way per se, but hey I might give some think pieces to improve in some parts. (I'm not a good writer so take it with a grain of salt lmao)
Go sa next chap for form blabla...
BINABASA MO ANG
Hear It from a Reader (open)
Random"Don't let anyone tell you that you can't." Wanna read my thoughts to your story? Not a professional critic, just a reader.