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Third

"Love You Anymore"
Written by: Lucha_Mia
Genre: Romance

Disclaimers and Points of Critic;
•Read 8/23 Parts
•It's a really short one
•It is my opinion and will not speak for all readers.
•Contain Spoilers
•So... it's hard to not be a bias sometimes.

User @yournaughtyfan feedback;

Mabuti na lang talaga ang pinaka objective ng book ko na ito ay ang magiging posibleng reaksiyon ng mga mambabasa. I mean, it's so hard you know. So maybe I get a pass of being on the 'only praise' reactions?

I don't know if it's because I'm really easy to please and a hopeless romantic or what but the only thing I can say... I love it. I'm only on the beginning and I still just want it to go on and keep on reading. I am on my full reader mode, the whole time.

The characters are so relatable and easy to get attached to. They've got interesting attitude and roles too. I don't know much about them yet, (I'm still on chapter 4) but I badly want to know them more. Their stories and struggles, and the things that makes them real in my mind.

Simple lang ako na reader, kung napapangiti ako ng story then I'm definitely sold. No questions.

It's very humurous. The dialogues and the scenes are funny and like a day to day real conversations. Tama lang ang timpla, iyong hindi nakakasawa.

The sequence are effective too, a very clear scenes that can easily to visualize. Even the settings are detailed and using a non fictional set make it in the "relatable" point.

What can I say? Malinis ang pagkakasulat at hindi magulo. Madaling mabasa nang hindi na kinakakailangan pa ng re-read to process some scenes.

More importantly, the plot. It's an interesting one and I can't say it's original but I can say you can make a good if not a great version. I wanted to know more, to see how Clara and Niall's story will unfold. For Margarette and Michael's character... To what will happen next. And if the author made they reader feel that then I guess they really doing a good job.

Emotions. What a moment, though. Nakakakilig, for real, kinikilig talaga ako sa dalawang bida. Maganda ang mga linyahan at napapangiti talaga ako. It's suspicious though, cause I know I might cry when I make it to the climax of the story. Sanay na ako so, let's see.

Medyo short lang ang chapters, nakakabitin pero ayos naman. The pacing isn't slow or too fast but people are different in some way.

Kung hindi pa talaga nahalata na nagustuhan ko ay ewan ko na lang talaga. If you want a story of a very relatable and got some feels in your stomach then it's really the good one for that. If also, you're a sucker for fluff scenes like me maybe you want to try this.

May naaalala akong story na ganito rin ang way ng storyline niya but I can't pinpoint it so much. I remember really reading that one overnight. (Lol)

Favorites

•An Open Letter to the Man I Let Go
I felt that and I'm not even heartbroken right now.

•These lines are too funny to ignore, I don't care what you say.

*Kinilig talaga ako diyan, wtf.

*Chapter 4. Just because IT IS CHAPTER 4.

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My rating: 9/10

/TRIVIA! NADELETE KO ITO BUTI NA LANG NAREDO KO WTF NAGSTOP PUSO KO FOR A MINUTE. I HATE REWRITING SO... THANK GOD./

Message to the Author

[Sabog confetti] This is a Gem!
I added it in my library! I really loved it, for real.
The whole thing just short so let me know what you think of my impression to your story. Any questions and corrections are open!

To more stories to come... good luck!

Remarks;

(Nakakahiya sayo, pero...)

Please proceed and check my story, Mishan And The Monster and let me know what you think too! Give love if you have time :)

[10/02/19]