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I love the overall aesthetic of your cover and title. To be completely honest your whole book is very aesthetically pleasing. It's very appealing. It's the type of book I'd choose to read if I was just browsing through wattpad looking for something new.
| S Y N O P S I S | Synopsis is perfect. You say just enough for potential readers to be enticed and commit to reading the first chapter.
| P L O T | I really like your plot. I could see your book being made into a series or something. There's not too much I can say about it because you take a while to actually get back to New Years Eve, when the incident actually takes place. But that's not a bad thing, I think the pacing of your story is perfect.
| C H A R A C T E R D E V E L O P M E N T | I don't really feel like Eleanor has much personality. The trauma of the incident seems to be her defining feature and shapes all of her other personality traits.
| D I A L O G U E | Dialogue sounds awkward in some places but is generally okay.
| O R I G I N A L I T Y | Your book has the high school meets cluedo thing going for it. While the concept isn't particularly original I do feel that you are making the story your own.
| G R A M M A R | Grammar is generally fine but your wording is awkward in places. I recommend reading chapters allowed to check that your sentences and ideas flow well.
| W R I T I N G S T Y L E | You have a really pretty writing style and have a nice balance between action and description in your story. It would be nice to see a little more variety in language as your main characters are from a very privileged background.
| O V E R A L L | There's not much to say about your book because it's pretty clean. Your plot is very interesting and has a lot of potential and I see your book doing well in future.
