BLOOP BLOOP BLOOP BLOOP BLOOP BLOOP-PERS!

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This is the part where some scenes and concept ideas weren't used in the final cut along with how this story came to be. Let's enjoy them together!

I'm sure y'all know that it started with Come To Life (after I had asked for permission from Dally, thanks again by the way), but did you know that Stephen wasn't the only one who had snuck their way in?

Joseph was played by Jessie since she was the leader of PLP and a little scary in certain scenes. I won't spoil much of Come To Life, but it was unintentional for Jessie to almost be a genderbent version of Joseph.

Nick and Cole were all over the place since Becky was supposed to be Cole but acted more on the calm side and she wore a creamy yellow. Caleb was going to be Nick but was assigned to work at PLP which would be perfect for Cole. In one way, you could say that they switched bodies and "Cole" dyed "his" hair.

Arin isn't a bad guy, but after seeing that Andy wore all red and Stephen was all blue (not to mention that I don't Red VS Blue) the only thing I thought was that I accidentally made Arin the bad guy when he's just a chill dude who likes girls. There's no way Arin would do what Andy did to Jessie and I'm betting Arin would snap Andy's neck if the two were to cross paths and Arin found out what Andy did.

Life Hunter vs Scone Hunter share the same hairstyle and color, but I had to make Hunter look... a little more human since half his skin is dark purple, one of his eyes is pitch black minus the puple, and other reasons. Yeah, try and be a lawyer looking like you came from a video game. Cool clothes, but not lawyer material.

His last name is a play of two things.

Psi is the name of his "flip side" while gish is the very common easter egg of my story since It's GishKid (now known as Gaming With Gish) was the first person to read one of my stories for YT. Not to mention that it was the first video ever to show case a story I made.

Now on to some concept ideas.

An idea for the "heist" scene stayed almost as uncut as how it turned out apart from a few details.

The first idea was that Jessie was kidnapped and Stephen had to save her in an abandoned farm and she was kidnapped by a separate party since Andy was only going to be in chapter one alone.
When Stephen arrived, he was going to be so mad that he managed to rip the locked door right off its hinges and use it as a weapon for a bit before pulling out Savannah. The party & Jessie would've been shocked to see a display that they just let the two go home.

This idea was later changed where it was reversed. Instead of Jessie being kidnapped, it was Stephen who was in the barn. Everything was still the same as if it was Stephen being the hero and Jessie was the damsel in distress.

Later, the idea of a big brawl came in with both sides, but whoever was playing the hero role would end up being a part of a sinkhole. Whether they lived or not was on the fence.

When the final idea of the heist came about, it was written on the spot like how I'm writing this part. The only thoughts that were planned out was Andy trying to fool Jessie, the brawl between Steohen and the gang, and the idea of a heart pumping scene even if it was unclear of what was going to happen then and there.

Another idea that changed was Rose's character and what she had.

Originally, there was no meaning to what the people wore but now there is. Blue is good, red is bad, and purple is unknown unless there's a small indicator like Caleb's hair clip or Hunter's eyes.

Rose was purple just because but the idea that she could be a spy for Andy came around when Caleb was created since I had noticed that by then, everyone who was good was blue while Andy was red and bad. Rose didn't have either apart from the small pink in her hair.

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