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Preeta and karan reach the BCL.....
They both were silent in the car all the way soon they reached BCL
karan: pehele tum jao....mujhe kuch kaam hai
Preeta: tumhen mujhe batane ki zaroorat nahi mujhe apni biwi manne ke liye itne sharminda ho .....ki mere saath andar bhi nahi aasakte...
(Looks at karan with a death stare.)
Karan:(afraid) (in mind) arey main kyun Darra hoon isse...
Karan: Haan main sharminda hoon  tum jaisi ladki ko kaun apni biwi manega....
(Looking at preeta)
Hearing that preeta's eyes fill with tears
Preeta:(wiping her tears) she gets out of the car and leaves....
Karan: yeh kya boldiya main ne fir se rula diya ise........(recollection) joh isne kiya hai uske liye bhugat rahi hai....
Angry man gets out of the car and takes his cricket kit and leaves inside....
Inside the club
Shiv: hi yaar karan kaisa hai....
Karan: haa tthik hoon.....
Shiv: arey woh....(suddenly stops)
Looks at preeta passing from there
Shiv: smiles at her she replies with a smile
Shiv: wow yaar yeh kitni khubsurat hai naa...
Karan:(angry) kaun yeh ....aur khubsurat....huh....
Shiv:teri nazar weak hogayi hai karan dekh toh....kitni pyaari hai yaar .....aise lagta hai ki ek hi nazar mai pyaar hojaye....
Karan:(fuming with anger) oye tujhe kitne baar bola uske baare main baat mat kar...woh married hai....aur uska husband mera dosth hai.....
Shiv: kya yaar tu bhi tune hi toh bola tha shaadi main complications hai...toh kamse kam dosthi toh banti hai...main abhi aata hoon and he leaves towards preeta...
Karan:...... compilations hongi toh todega kya shadi ko....main aise nahi hoone doonga....
(In mind) lekin kyun....haa main kyun iske taraf aise possesive ho raha hoon....
Khair jaane doh mujhe us shiv ko us ladki se door rakhna hoga....
By the time he reaches her room he see shiv leaving with a sad face....
Karan rushes towards shiv and asks him
Karan: kya huva moohn kyun latkaya hai...
Shiv:yaar pata nahi use kaise sab pata chal gaya....mujhe kehne lagi woh shaadi shuda hai aur firse yeh baat nahi dohrana chahati.......aur chali gayi ......
Karan: chali gayi kahan....aur kyun...
Shiv: yaar jab main ne usse kaha ki tu uske pati ka dosth hai achanak utthke chali gayi wahan se...c section ki taraf....
Shiv: (shocked).....karan c section main toh construction chal raha hai....
Karan: tune use kyun bataya ki uska pati mera dosth hai....pagal kahika...
Yeh ladki wahan kyun gayi....isne thaan liya ki yeh mujhe pareshaan karke rahegi....
Runs towards the c section.......
Karan: preeta ......preeta......preeta....(shouting)
Preeta: Mahira kahan ho tum.....(shouting).......
Preeta: iss Mahira ne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya.......
Mahira is standing somewhere and smirks.....in the construction site itself.....
Flash back....
Mahira and sherlyn shake hands....
Mahira: Haan toh batoo kya plan hai tumhara ....
Sherlyn: preeta ko maar do....kill her...
Mahira: first shocked then smirks....
Mahira: Haan tthik hai lekin kaise...
Sherlyn: yeh hi toh tumhara test hai...isse pata chalega ki tum meri dosth banne ke layak hoya nahi....
Flashback ends
Mahira: (in mind)accha huva cricket club main construction chal raha hai .....warna iss preeta ko maarne ke liye mujhe accident karwana padhta...ek baar yeh mar jaye mere aur karan ke beech main koi nahi rahega aur iss sherlyn ke saath mera connection cut....😏😈😈😈smirks...
Ab preeta mera fake msg padhke yahan pohanch toh gayi hai kaash iske upar koi patthar gir jaye....kaash...
And she touches a bamboo😁😁😁😁
Aur Mahira ke upar saare bamboo gir gaye hai....kyun ki woh bohat door khadi hai toh Preeran main se kisi ko uski aawaz sunayi nahi deti....
Saare bamboo uske sir pe....😂😂😂
Preeta: yeh Mahira ne mujhe aisi jagah kyun bulaya milne ko yahan toh bohat risk hai....
Meanwhile....karan...
Karan: preeta....preeta ......preeta .......
kahan hai yeh ladki....isne than liya hai ki mujhe satayegi....
Preeta:(heard karan shouting her name)
(Shouting)karan........karan......karan.....
Karan heard her voice and went in the direction of sound....
Karan: preeta ....preeta.....
Soon sees her......and runs like a metro and hugs her.....
Pushes her away grabbing her by shoulders....
Karan: pagal ho kya tum yahan kyun aayi....tumne thhanli hai mujhe stane ki main kitna dar gaya tha....agar tumhen kuch ho jata toh.....
He just realised what he said...and leaves her shoulders...
Karan: woh woh....agar tumhen kuch hojata toh mom mujhe daantti...and he turn back....
While running karan by mistake hits a bamboo....and preeta observe the roof on his head is going to fall......preeta runs and pushes karan....he go and fall at some distance.... turning back he see the roof falling on preeta .....and in a minute everything falls on her and she collapsed and her head starts to bleed...
🤕🤕🤕
Karan: (shocked and tensed and broken....shouts)
Preetaaaaaaaa...............😨😨😨😨😨
The scene is calmed....preeta is unconscious under the pile of big hard concrete.....karan is at a distance....from her...
Preeta in mind....kya yeh hi hai humari khani.....yahin khatam hogayi.....and suddenly she find light reaching her eyes....and she falls unconscious.....
Karan is moving the concrete parts one by one....
Karan:(in mind) yeh ladki pagal hogayi thi kya zaroorat thi inke neeche aane ki...mujhe bachane ke liye isne apni jaan johkim main daaldi...mujhe ise bacha na hooga...
Soon he successfully mooves all the concrete.....and finds.....Severely hurt preeta bleeding on the ground....
Karan grab her head....he starts tapping her cheek ....
Karan: preeta preeta ......preeta uttho.....preeta..... preeta....he starts crying....he picks up preeta in his arms...
And runs to his car....puts preeta in his lap and asks shiv to drive.....
On the way karan constantly taps her cheek...and.....he hugs her and cries....hard.....
Karan:(crying) preeta uttho preeta....😫😫😫😫😫
All this situation is seen by shiv.....shiv is shocked to see karan crying for some girl.....you know what i mean ....THE KARAN LUTHRA is crying for a mere girl....in Shiv's veiw......he thinks preeta is just a mere girl....but in Karan's veiw she is his world.....and he doesn't know when she became that important to him
Kaise huva in the background....
Karan's is crying like hell....shiv tries to console him....
Shiv: karan tu matt roo yaar kuch nahi hooga....hum hospital jaa rahe hai naa...
Karan is out of this world and just tapping her cheek.....
Karan: preeta uttho....
Preeta suddenly gains consciousness.....and wakes up....
Preeta is too happy to die by seeing karan crying for her....she tries to speak....
Preeta: kkkkk...........ka..ka..ka...karan....
Karan is happy to see her conscious....
Karan:preeta....(crying).....tumhen hosh aagaya ...preeta ......and he hugs her...
Preeta:(coughs blood of her mouth)...
Karan: grabbing her....preeta tum tthik ho....preeta....preeta....
Karan shakes her....
Preeta: aaah....karan dard ho raha hai....
Karan: sorry sorry.....preeta....preeta soona matt jaage raho....preeta...
Preeta: karan mujhe tumhen kuch batana tha...
Karan: nahi preeta abhi kuch matt bolo...ek baar hum hospital pohanch jaaye....
Preeta: nahi kaa....karan mere paas utna tym nahi hai.....
Karan: chup....pagal kuch bhi bolti ho....preeta uttho...soona matt...preeta suno....
Preeta: suno naa....karan....main ne tumhen dhoka nahi diya.....kabhi deneka sooch nahi sakti....karan sunrahe ho naa....woh she....sher....sherlyn mujhe maarne waali thi fir bhi main aayi.....tum....tum ....tumhare paas....tumhen sacch batane....main ne tumhen dhoka nahi diya....
Karan: preeta abhi kuch matt bolo...preeta...jagi raho....aankhen matt band karna...
Preeta: bas ek ......ek.....baar hug.....karo mujhe.....
Karan hugs her.....
Preeta: (whisper)......I....I....I...LOVE....YOU.... BAJARBATTU.....
and the hand with which she hugs him fall apart....
Karan shakes her
Karan: preeta preeta....kya bola tumne ek aur baar bolna....preeta uttho...preeta....uttho....
Karan cries loudly hugging her....
Karan: preeta....preeta....
Shiv: karan hum pohanch gaye...jaldi preeta toh leke chal...
Karan picks her in his arms....he still feels her heart beating.....karan is happy hearing her heart beat....
Karan: doctor.....doctor....... doctor.....
Doctor approach him and put preeta on a stretcher and take her into the operation room.......

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