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karan is practicing for his match, he gets a call
Karan: hello mom, boliye kyun call kiya
Rakhi:karan beta jaldi ghar aaja...(sound happy)
Karan:kya huva mom, aur aap itni khush...koi good news hai kya....
Rakhi: puttar, bohat badi baat hai ...tere pappa....
Karan: kya huva mom, dad ko kya huva...(tensed)
Rakhi: kuch nahi huva puttar tere pappa ne aaj bohat improvement dikhaya hai....doctor kehrahe hain ki jaldi hi unhen hoosh aasakta hai
Karan:(filled with joy) kya mom sachh...main abhi ghar aata hoon...
Karan packs his cricket stuff and starts leaving when he saw preeta standing there behind him....his happiness had no end he was so happy that he forgot every thing between them and hugged her....
Sajdaaaaaaaa......aaaaaa
Preeta:(shocked)...kya huva tumhen....kya kar rahe ho, tum....
Karan:preeta.... preeta.....dad ko hosh aane waala hai...
Preeta is very happy to hear all this...
Preeta: (excited) sach main karan yeh toh bohat acchi baat hai ....tears drop from her eyes....
Karan suddenly recolects everything which happened before...how his dad is in that condition.... recollects sherlyn's words..."zaroor preeta ne hi pappa ji ko kuch kaha hoga isiliye unka accident huva"....
Karan pushed preeta away....the happiness on his face fades away....
Karan:(angrily) door hato mujhse....
Karan leaves from there....gets in his car and starts driving....

At LUTHRA'S house
Karan enters the house and throws his cricket kit on floor and runs to mahesh's room haran sees everyone is present in the room scattered in different directions....all are waiting for doctors positive response... except one...
Karan approach the doctor and ....
Karan:(confused) doctor dad kaise hai...?
Doctor:abhi main kuch tthik se bata nahi sakta Mr LUTHRA....aapke pappa ne hume response dene ki koshish ki mujhe thoda time aur chahiye....inhen observe karne ke liye...
Karan: (little relieved) tthik hai doctor aap jitna chahe utna time lijiye....par hume ek positive answer batayiye.....
Karan gets up from there and goes near rishab
Rishab:(comforting him) mere bhaayi tention matt le dad tthik hojayenge...
Karan reacting to Rishab with a smile...

After a few hours of waiting..

Doctor: yeh bohat acchi khabar hai inke senses tthik se kaam kar rahe hai...aur yeh humari baaten bhi sun payenge ek ya do ghanton main inhen hosh aasakta hai...lekin ek buri khabar hai...inki yaddash....
Luthras:kya huva inki yaddash ko....
Doctor:inke sir pe khatarnak choot ki wajah se inki yaddash kamzor hai....yeh unlogon ko bhul sakte hai joh inki zindagi main naye hai...matlab...joh inke pariwar ke nahin hai....toh woh log inke saamne nahi aasakte...nahi toh inke dimag pe pressure padke yeh fir coma main jaa sakte hai....
Sherlyn:(in mind)....hae bhagwaan ise tthik karne ki kya zaroorat thi ....maar dalte toh main khush ho jati....yeh mera buddha sasur...kahin ise sab yaad aagaya toh...
Rishab: tthik hai doctor hum dhayaaan raheknge....

After a few hours ...
Mahesh try to move his fingers...karan observe this he reach to his hand and grab it dad ....dad....main karan dad apne aankhen kholiye...
Every one shocked by seeing Mahesh responding by grabbing Karan's hand...

Mahesh:ka..ka...karan...beta.....
Karan:(eyes filled with tears hugs his dad).....dad....aap tthik ho gaye...
Every one surround mahesh's bed... every one have tears in their eyes....
Mahesh: Rakhi ji yeh sabko kya huva sab ki aankehen kyun bhar aayi....
Rakhi: Mahesh ji sab ki aankehen khushi se bhar aayi hai...aap tthik joh hogaye hai...
Mahesh: lekin Rakhi ji mujhe kya huva hai main toh ek dam tthik hoon...
Mahesh looks around towards his family....who have surrounded him....he is very happy seeing everyone ...but he was not able to identify one person
Mahesh:(pointing at sherlyn)....yeh kaun hai Rakhi ji...?
Every one are shocked seeing Mahesh Mahesh forgot sherlyn....
Rakhi:(confused what to tell)....Mahesh ji yeh....
Kareena:bhaayi yeh sherlyn hai mere dosth ki beti, aapko dekhne aayi hai
Mahesh:accha thank you beta aap yahan aayi mujhe dekhne...
Sherlyn:(smiling) nahi uncle mujhe aapki chinta ho rahi thi toh mai ne socha ki yahan aajaoo...aapko dekhne
(In mind)accha huva iss buddhe ko kuch yaad nahi hai...nahi toh meri jaan hi le leta...
Mahesh tries to talk more but his head starts to ache...
Mahesh:(in pain)aah.....
Luthras:kya huva.....(shocked and tensed)
Doctor: hattiye ....(making way out of luthras circle)....mujhe dekhne deejiye...yeh acchi khabar nahi hain....Mahesh ji apni puraani yaaden yaad karne ki koshish kar rahe hai...koi naya insaan hai kya inke saamne...inhen taklif pohanch rahi hai toh pls inke saamne matt rahiye...
Kareena:Haan ... sherlyn (looking at her).....tum jaldi yahan se chale jaoo...bhaayi ko taklif ho rahi hai....
Sherlyn:lekin bua main ne toh....
Rishab:tumhen samajh nahi aata kya ek baar kehne se...pls jaaoo yahan se..
Raakhi: Rishab (angrily) koi aise baat karta hai kya....(looks at sherlyn) sherlyn beta tum apne kamre main jaoo...main thodi deer main tumse aake milti hoon....
Mahesh is unconscious due to stress on hi mind...
Doctor:abhi yeh behosh hai...inhen fir do ghante main hosh aasakta hai sambhalke koi doosra inke saamne na aaye...aur main ne joh medicines diye hai unhen time pe dete rahiye...
Rakhi:tthin hai doctor hum dhayaan raheknge....thank you
Rakhi asks Rishab to send the doctor off...
Rishab:(taking his bad) chaliye doctor main aapko chood deta hoon...
On the way doctor and rishab conversation
Doctor:kisi bhi emergency main bejijhak call karna...(leaves..)
Rishab: thank god dad tthik ho gaye...
Meanwhile sherlyn in the room
Yeh Mahesh Luthra ko bhi abhi hoosh aana tha ...mere pati ne toh batani ki koshis tak nahi ki mai. Uski patni hoon....lekin accha hi huva main uske saamne nahi aaoongi toh use mere related baaten bhi yaad nahi aayengi....
Hears a knock at the door..
Hears Rakhi's voice sherlyn beta...andar ajaooon....
Rakhi: sherlyn mujhe tumse kuch bohat zaroori baat karni hai
Sherlyn: (rolling her eyes) ji mummy ji kahiye...
Rakhi: beta woh main chahati hoon ki tum kuch dino ke liye ghar chodke chali jaao....apne maa ke yahan rehlo....
Sherlyn:lekin mummy ji...
Rakhi: mujhe maaf karna beta...par main aur poora pariwar Mahesh ji ke liye koi problem nahi chahate...tum samajh sakti ho naa main kya kehrahi hoo.
Sherlyn: (in mind).....yeh kya agar main yahan se chali gayi aur yeh Mahesh Luthra ko meri kartoot yaad agahi toh...nahi main nahi jaaongi
Rakhi:kya huva beta kya sooch rahi hoo
Sherlyn:(in mind)...Haan ek chance hai Rishab....mummy ji Rishab ki se ek baar baat karloon....
Rakhi: nahi beta main ne Rishab se baat kar liye hai...tum pls mujhe samajhne ki koshish karo...main khud nahi chahati aisa lekin Mahesh ji bohat dino baad hosh main aaye hai bas kuch din tum apne maa ke yahan raho...baadmain main khud tumhen wapis apne ghar main le aaongi....
Sherlyn: tthik hai mummy ji aap kehti hai toh tthik hai...and starts packing her stuff....
Soon sherlyn leaves the Luthra house...
Every one are in Mahesh's room...
Mahesh: Rakhi ji aap kaha gayi thi?
Rakhi: Mahesh ji woh mujhe kuch achha bana tha aapke liye toh main kitchen main gayi thi
Mahesh: tthik hai Rakhi ji...(looking at everyone and said) aaplog yahan kya kar rahe hai...aap sab jayyiye aur dinner kijiye...
When everyone were leaving...
Mahesh: (harsh voice) karan tum ruko mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...
Karan is confused by Mahesh's tone and nodds...

That's for today

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