PLEASE READ IF YOUY PLAN TO CONTINUE PAST THIS CHAPTER!!!!!
Hey everyone. I know I've been gone for almost a full year so sorry to anyone who was reading this story. Things just got hectic with senior year, college apps, the SAT etc. However, with the Corona thing, and summer coming up I've decided to start writing again.
I re-read this story and I'm not really happy with it but don't want to abandon it. So instead I'm going to lay out some changes I'm making from my previous chapters. I'll try to go and edit them after I release this, however this is more for the current readers so you don't have to go re read any chapters.
So the biggest problem I had with my story was the lack of character arcs that I and planned or rushed in the first few chapters. I want to create actual diverse characters with there own problems which is something I struggled with in my last R6 story too.
So first off for Y/N I'm erasing the part where he's said that he want's to live for Freya and Susie. Basically Y/N cares for the two but still has no sense of self preservation.
For Freya, I'm eliminating the part where she tries to get with you in your room. I plan to make her more a tsundere character.
Susie will be the same.
Also if there is any small inconsistencies with characters and how they act or feel sorry for that too. I want the characters to actually feel different. For example Y/N is a character who values human life except for his own and he has to overcome living with murders.
Anyway, sorry for any inconvenience and I hope you enjoy.
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Innocence (Male Reader x Dead By Daylight)
FanfictionAfter you get embarrassed in front of your whole class you are walking through the woods alone, until you're not alone. You get thrown into a twisted game of cat and mouse... only to be saved by the murder? Now on the entity's hit list, you must sur...
