WHAT NOW?
LKP is not finished yet - I have planned out a bonus 'epilogue' sort of chapter that might turn things around a bit. If you guys don't like it, I can delete it. Keep your eyes open for this.
EDITING
So this book was started over a year ago, and many small edits have been made as the chapters were published. Now that I have the full book, I am going to do some major editing of Last Kiss in Paris. These include:
- Fixing up grammar, word choice and removing awkward phrasing
- Removing waffle and expanding on the important scenes
- Better character descriptions from the beginning (especially for main characters)
- Plot inconsistencies
- Changing some names and spellings (Buvhi-> Bhuvi and Sadipoh -> Sadipo)
- Paragraphing (which I'm terrible at apparently)
Etc.
The overall plot will stay the same, so no need to reread unless you really want to :)
I'll mark all chapters with an asterisk (*) and remove them as I edit along the way.
GENERAL NOTES
1. Events in this book are completely fictional and are for entertainment purposes only.
2. People featured in this book have either given me permission to use their name, or are completely original, or may have resemblance to real life persons but have drastically different names/behaviourisms etc (and are therefore not based on them). Moreover, the stuff characters do in this book, regardless of whether they are based off anyone, are completely fictional.
3. If you do, however, feel offended by any character, event, etc. pls message me and I will immediately change/remove it because LKP is your book and I want you to be happy about it. Please do not feel the need to go to extreme lengths to express your vague point by doing things like random dramatic pantomime stuff which is quite confusing. If you directly ask me (nicely or not nicely) I will appeal to your requests.
4. I actually try very hard to be nice to all readers and people in the book by writing everything so it's not too extreme. E.g. there is no largely inappropriate behaviour, no explicit swearing, the only person killed is not based off anyone (MC Lunaar), 'bad' characters usually redeem themselves at the end. I'm really sorry if I offended anyone, however.
5. Everyone and every event in this book is fictional.
6 References to alcohol, drugs etc are completely made up and not reflective of real life at all
7. Contrary to popular belief, Pierre is an original character
8. I do not own any of the real trademarks/associations mentioned in any chapter of the book (e.g. Gucci, Chanel, etc).
Koolpig
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Last Kiss in Paris
RomanceAn exchange trip to Paris. A reunion with her old lover. After a series of unforgettable events, a fifteen year old Amrisha is torn between being with her childhood sweetheart Benjamin, or the mysterious player Pierre. Ben is sweet, caring and beaut...
