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SHORT STORY
Camp Norfolk by DinaHusseini84
Cover - 10/ 10 points
Detail/Description - 9/20 points
Characters Depth - 15/ 30 points
Plot - 30/40
Total= 64 points/100
Interest: 4/5
The story is intriguing but is lacking in description, some is given, but not enough to make the reader feel the environment and emotions of the characters. More adjectives are needed as well.
Astray by silentcabal
Cover - 7/ 10 points
Detail/Description - 11/20 points
Characters Depth - 15/ 30 points
Plot - 20/40
Total = 53/100
Interest: 4/5
A phone call/ text story, which is different, but more description is needed. Punctuation needs work, and better labeling of which character is talking is needed as well. Other than that's, it's an interesting story, that has a sad and cautionary feel to it.
POETRY
Galaxies Inside Her Head by herald_of_hell
Cover - 10/ 10 points
Detail/Description - 16/20 points
Characters Depth - 20/ 30 points
Plot - 25/40
Total = 71/100
Interest: 4/5
Unique, bizzare, and different, this story goes outside the box with its themes and messages.
Fallen Stars by dachaoticmind
Cover - 5/ 10 points
Detail/Description - 14/20 points
Characters Depth - 10/ 30 points
Plot - 22/40
Total = 51/100
Interest: 4/5
The second chapter, Angel stands out more than the other two. It's sad and touching, and brings awareness to homeless veterans. Please work on more pieces like the Angel chapter.
1001 Words by xxAspen_Wintersxx
Cover - 7/ 10 points
Detail/Description - 18/20 points
Characters Depth - 20/ 30 points
Plot - 25/40
Total = 70/100
Interest: 4/5
Attention grabbing at first, but could use more outside the box narrative. It comes off as pretty typical poetry. The rhyming is clever.
Poetic Justice by blackgirlp0w3r
Cover - 9/ 10 points
Detail/Description - 18/20 points
Characters Depth - 27/ 30 points
Plot - 35/40
Total = 89/100
Interest: 5/5
Political, bold, brave, and woke. Punctuation could use some work.
Illusions by 21xcenturyliability
