Hey guys, so good and bad news. As you can tell I unpublished "The New Girl". I'm really sorry for the readers who were somewhat enjoying the book. I feel like the book was a complete bust and was really bad. Therefore, I am redoing the book a bit. Kind of more than a bit. Thank you to all of your great advice! With this advice it has convinced me to make this book better. The book was really organized and rushed and was just not good. I feel like it could have gone somewhere but I wasn't very focused on it at all and it just was bad. Nothing compared to my first book "Fallin for you". Trust me, after these changes have been made the book is going to be so so so much better. I am going to be more focused on the book with regular updates and better content. Again I'm so sorry for the inconvenience for some people but this is going to be so much better. When I'm done I will post an update of the big things that have changed and it shouldn't take that long for me to get up the first part! Thank you guys for the advice and corporation and I'm so sorry for how bad that book was!
ATTENTION: If you did not read the first version story of THE NEW GIRL where she went from the US to the UK then ignore this next note cuz it won't make since but those of you that did read the first person here's what I've changed....
HEY YALL!! I finally got the first part written and It's Definitely a lot more organized/better than the first part of the new girl. So I am changing the fact that she's moving from the UK to the US. Mack is Claire and I added Jeremiah. Tom is still Tom and Kit/Ana is now Melody. Peppermint is now Blue Jeans. And Melodys (Ana) parents died but she is living with her grandparents which is in America where she moves to. Her parents worked in science labs before they died instead of working with animals. Tom lives with his Aunt cuz his parents died. His aunts name is Tegan. And really the entire plot changed but the description of the book kind explains it. Tom and Melody (Ana) turn out to be best friends and maybe more than that. Tom plays American football and Melody (Ana) does dance but they are both really smart and love science. And I think that's all the important things that changed. If y'all have any questions message me and I'll be glad to talk with you! And don't forget to give me feedback!! Thanks y'all!!
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The New Girl
Teen FictionA young teenage girl (Melody) goes through a big change in her life when her parents both suddenly die. She is forced to move from the Cambridge, UK to Tennessee, USA to live with her grandparents. Melody has to meet new friends and change her entir...
