Sorry it's short but I need feedback, please comment what you think or how I could improve this story (Feedback please) 3rd person POV
Suddenly a streak of light comes over The dark room, two shadows are cast, one male one female
"I think they're asleep"Weiss whispers, unsure of her own words.
"Then lets not wake them" Richthofen says. She nods and they enter the quiet room and close the door behind them.
The two get their bearings as Weiss goes into her drawer and grabs her nightwear. She looks over at the red eyed teen, his eyes glowing in the dark. He just silently nods; turning around.
Some ruffling is heard as Manfred takes off his shirt. Weiss blushes averting her gaze
'Why should you care!? Your a young woman not some.... school girl!' She mentally screams at herself. Blushing the whole way through.
"You can look" Weiss whispers. As Manfred turns around, she notices an abundance of scars adorning him but the biggest of them all seemed to be a large,messy scar that resembled a semi circle by his hip.
"How'd you get that?" She says pointing to the scar, seemingly knowing what it was already, Richthofen's answer was simple;
"Panzerfaust nicked me" he says, Weiss's eyes widen
"Nicked you!? It took out your hip!" She whisper yells. Surprised.
"I'm alive aren't I? And keep your voice down, let's get to sleep" he says Weiss blushes deeply when he says that.
"About that..." she says embarrassed. Manfred raises his eyebrow. Weiss closes her eyes.
'I can't believe I'm about to do this...'
"D-do you want to sleep with me?" She spits out, her pride not allowing her to say it in anything but a whisper.
Silence...
When all she got was a blank stare from the two red orbs, she tries to correct herself.
"W-well I M-mean-" she was cut off by him walking past her to the bed that was hers.
And without a word he plops himself down, and lies down, turning to the edge of the bed.
Weiss had no idea of what to do, she had never slept with a boy before... she uncomfortably walks towards the bed and lies down.
The two were now on opposite sides of the bed.... as far as can be...
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Flashback
Manfred's POV
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Me and Undyne run down a large hallway of my parents mansion, we couldn't stifle our laughter.
Y/n was the seeker.
I grab Undyne by the waist and pull her behind a pillar, we fall on our buts so I'm now sitting and she's in my lap
"Shhhhhh! Be quiet he's gonna hear us!" I whine, she just giggles snuggling up as we hide.
"Ready or not, here I come!" We hear Y/n's voice as Undyne twists In my grip. Trying not to giggle.
We both get into more comfortable positions, and she sits on my lap, facing me putting her hands around my neck.
We both blush.
"W-what are you doing?!" I whisper yell, I had seen people do this before in those movies my mom and dad watch. She blushes deep
"I-I don't know! I see my parents do this all the time! I think is some sort of friendship thing, here!" She says, grabbing my hand and putting it on her hips hear her behind. We both just blush deeply...
"Manfred?" She asks slowly.
"Y-yeah?" I stutter out.
"Your my friend right?..." she says getting more embarrassed. This was not like Undyne to show her feminine side,
"Of course" I say reassuringly. She closes her eyes and hugs me. I didn't know what to do, so I just hugged back
"Then promise you wont ever leave me?" She asks.
"Su-"
"Guys!?" We hear Y/n's voice
End
Y/n's POV.
I wake up on the floor as usual covered in... blankets!?
'What?!' I mentally yell. Looking up I see that they had come from Weiss's bed.
"Wh-" standing up I see a sight I'd never thought I'd see; Manfred and Weiss
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I smile, taking out my phone.
"naja naja wie die plattenspieler (well well, how the turntables)" I say snapping a photo. A shit-eating grin adoring my face. At the sudden stimulation of the flash Manfred and Weiss quickly awake and see me, upon seeing the position they were in they both blush dark red and separate.
After recovering Manfred looks at me
"Lösche es(delete it)" he says plainly in a threatening tone... I gain a smile
"Ich weiß nicht, wovon du sprichst, ich habe gerade "foo fighter" auf meinem Handy gespielt (I don't know what your talking about, I was just playing "foo fighter" on my phone)" I says innocently, Weiss pales as she realizes what we were talking about.
"Ich zeige dir einen Feind ... komm her! (I'll show you a foo fighter... come here!)" he yells chasing me out of the dorm
