What if Bluefur was born in Riverclan

Chapter fighting

We were off to war I flung my self to a near enemy,kicking them in the jaws,I caught a glimpse of Bluefur , hair beautiful than ever, fighting Thistleclaw blood draw blood covered her hair,it wasn't her blood, however a bad cut directly on her eyes it would blind her forever.he flung himself at Thistleclaw raking his shoulder.anything to defend bluefur.he realized with a pang, he HAD feelings for her more than a casual friend should. He Loved her.  He cared only for her , he was anxious if he had a chance with her,for everyone raved at her beauty. He  knew he wasn't special however he DID, have charmsPeak which could be used for advantage he was too deep in thought. He barely heard Thistlestar yowling,ThunderClan RETREAT! To even notice Bluefur was blind forever, for stupid rocks that had some sun on them.