Child of War (Tales of Autcrem)

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Hello everyone! or no one if no one reads this. Anyways first what I want to say is if you guys liked this chapter, go ahead and give some feedback, I'd really appreciate it. Also, critiques on things you think could have been better or just suggestions on different ways to write are much appreciated, please be nice though... I am a sensitive soul. I'm a pretty young and new writer. I'm mainly writing on here to grow and learn. I'm not trying to be internet famous but I want to grow as a writer and see if it's for me. I have a lot of these Tales of Autcrem stories made up, but they're not very long. Some are novellas, and others are short stories. It's just a massive epic fantasy world I made up with a long, long story and so many characters. I'm not sure it's any good, but I like the characters I made, so these stories are about them before or during the main story I made up. Hensei and another character not introduced are the main characters of this main story, but right now, I'm just having fun with the different characters I made up in its world.

Also, I feel I should thank a few people. One of my friend Wil for drawing the cover art. It really cool and I appreciate it because I couldn't draw anything nearly as good. I also want to thank him for reading these stories I write and giving me feedback. My friend Eli also read a lot of my stuff and gave me good feedback that I appreciated as well. Thanks to both of them.

I hope you guys like the chapter, and depending on how this Wattpad stuff takes off, I might start doing some other series. I have a lot made up and hope to get them out there. Also, excuse any grammar mistakes... I'm not very good at grammar. Also, one last thing, I know my username is very... strange but I'm not all about fire and suffering.

One more final last thing I promise... actually I don't. These stories may be a work in progress, depending on how what you guys suggest or critiques. When I write a story, I'm horrible at drafting and revising. When I have written the story, its how I made it up in my mind, so it's stuck like that. So normally I don't change them when they're done but maybe when I've finished releasing the rest of the chapters and you guys have given me some ideas I'll rewrite some of it. Or maybe I won't. These are what I call the trial and error stories for me. I want to learn from them more than anything.

So one more final ultimately last no more could come after this thing. Thanks for reading!