these books make me absolutely livid

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There is no easy way to start this

If you and I mean IF YOU EVER start a book with a half decent character and a situation the main character needs to over come.

STICK TO IT

No fucking times skips (imo it's lazy writing)
No "I found my boyfriend and I'm going to live with him forever and completely forget about my problems" bullshit
No "oh no 30 chapters in my problems come back but are quickly erased by my strong hunky boyfriend over 2 chapters that are the length of my tiny ass cock!"

These are the most annoying things ever.

Out of the 100+  books I have read on here
Only about 15% are readable
5% are actually good
The other 80% are ones not legible, terrible story that the author obviously made cuts and left plot holes in. Or they are discontinued ones





I hate to be that book critique guy but for the love of whatever wack god you believe in. Pass 8th grade literature before you EVER think of putting *Time Skip* in your subpar book.

The only times I'd say time skips are acceptable are when they have writing BACKING IT UP or HAVE ACTUAL MEANING BESIDES LAZY WRITING THE AUTHOR FORGOT TO PUT IN

Don't try to stuff every thing in 1 chapter

That's why there ARE chapters so you can space shit out.

Thank you for listening ❤✌

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