Hello! I'm considering discontinuing Complicated, and instead making a new story that I'll be calling either 14, 114, or simply Numbers.
I'd like to hear your feedback on what I should do.
Yours truly,
Leo.
Here's a sample of the story to help you guys decide.
Kieran felt cold. That was all he felt out here. He longed to go back home to the Dael that he knew, a place that he now was barely able to remember. It seemed like only seconds ago he was with his family, taking his family's hard-earned crops down to the market. But, instead of his usual delivery, someone had seen him. Noticed him. Noticed that he had something strange about him. He had their number! The black sap-like material he spread across his shoulder to instead look as if he had the number 114 rather than his real 14 no longer hid him. He knew that if people saw that his number had been 14, a very high-ranked one, his family would never be able to live in peace again. He guessed, now, that his secret was out. He was used to pretending to be less powerful than he was, but what could he do now?
Nothing.
He could do absolutely nothing.
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Complicated
RomanceThey always tell me I'm different. And, deep down, I know it too. I'm not like other kids my age, and I never will be. However, I can't exactly explain it. It's...complicated.