Re-Writing "My Immortal" So it Makes Sense

Chapter One

Chapter one.

A/N: "Fangs" to my best friend Raven (Haha, get it? I'm a goth?? Haha) for helping to proof read this story, you rock!! Justin, I love you and you rock too!! MCR ROCKS!!

Hi there, my name is Ebony D'arkness Dementia Raven Way, but please, call me Ebony. Im 17 years old and I have long, jet black hair, which is how I got my nickname of Ebony. My real name is Tara, but I hate that name (Real A/N: I thought it would make more sense because she couldnt have been BORN with long dark hair). There are purple streaks in it, the tips are red, and it comes down to my mid-back. I have light skin, a stark contrast to my hair already without my layers of white makeup that I wear to feel even more beautiful than I already am, and I have icy blue eyes. Quite a few times, I've been compared to Amy Lee.

I'm not related to Gerard Way, but I wish I was. I'm huge My Chem fan (I'm a half blood, and got introduced to them by a friend at my old school), and I'd love to meet him. I think he's really hot. I'm a vampire, but only partially causing my teeth to look human and pearly white. I'm also a witch on my mother's side (she's the vampire) and I attend Hogwarts in the UK. I'm a seventh year and I enjoy wearing black things such as the corset, skirt, boots and makeup I was sporting. My fishnets were pink and I felt very confident in this. Some preppy looking girls looked at me weird and whispered about how I looked strange. I flipped them off and continues my walk in the snow. Suddenly, I heard a very familiar voice.

"Ebony!" I turned to see another boy in my year, Draco running towards me.

"Oh, Hi Draco. What's up?" I asked.

"Nothing.." He said shyly. "Just wanted to have a conversa-" he was cut off by my friends calling for me.

"Sorry Draco, we can talk later, though!" I said as walked off towards my friends.

A/N: Is it any good? Please let me know!!