•Title: Secret Keeper
•Author: sencelesssexistance
•Author's Inspiration for Writing:
My inspiration for my writing would be just to get all the "what-if" or "I wish I could" situations in my head and turn them into a source of entertainment for me and for others too.
•Rating: PG-13
•Genre: Action
•Sub-Genre: Thriller
•Current Number of Chapters: 14
•Description:
Ever since Aria (pronunciation: ar-RYE-a) was born she's been a secret keeper. On contact, she learns a person's secrets...but it is impossible for her to reveal them. Secrets are safe with her. But what happens when a secret can end a person's life and Aria is the only one who knows? Can she save a life before it's too late?
•Zazz Points: (out of five): §§§§
•Review:
The cover is amazing, and the description is very attention catching. He introduction mixed with the beginning of the first chapter can be a bit confusing, but once we got pat that it wasn't bad.
The story has promise, and the writer does a good job of telling the story. However, There are some key things left unsaid, like how the main characters got into the situations or why the world works so differently in the story than in our own.
Minor grammar mistakes, but that's normal. No major flaws so far.
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